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Thread: Battle Rap: Freestyle Only (1,926 Replies, 6,165,079 Views) by Tyler6270
If you saw no metaphors or wordplay then I feel bad for you, I had some in there lol. If you can't catch on, then I feel like that would be where you lack.
Also, if I'm weak, why wouldn't you write...
Thread: Battle Rap: Freestyle Only (1,926 Replies, 6,165,079 Views) by Tyler6270
You wanted it you got it, I don’t play with scrubs
Sit back, think about what you’ve done
I ain’t showin no mercy no not on this day
Comin in “boss” to fire this kid away…
One line is all it...
Thread: Battle Rap: Freestyle Only (1,926 Replies, 6,165,079 Views) by Tyler6270
How is everyone so ****ing average on this site now? You guys just rhyme random **** together......
Thread: Battle Rap: Freestyle Only (1,926 Replies, 6,165,079 Views) by Tyler6270
If that were the case I never would have responded to you, because you're bad. Like really bad.
Thread: Battle Rap: Freestyle Only (1,926 Replies, 6,165,079 Views) by Tyler6270
Still waiting on Ricky.
Thread: Battle Rap: Freestyle Only (1,926 Replies, 6,165,079 Views) by Tyler6270
C4 bars? Maybe because they plastic
Life hazard, haphazard, lines bustin ya bladder
Lit up with focus, dark knows no dark matter…
Sit down, listen up, here comes the master.
I’ma straight get...
Thread: Battle Rap: Freestyle Only (1,926 Replies, 6,165,079 Views) by Tyler6270
Freshness? You have no meaning behind any of them lmao, you're syllable count is way off, you don't even have a double entendre in there..... Nothing with substance, you rhyme random ****ing words...
Thread: Battle Rap: Freestyle Only (1,926 Replies, 6,165,079 Views) by Tyler6270
Rick, how you gonna talk **** about that dude's bars when you can't ****ing write any yourself?
Thread: Battle Rap: Freestyle Only (1,926 Replies, 6,165,079 Views) by Tyler6270
Started the ember the flame keeps burning
Cogs started they keep on turning
Startin a brand new rap movement
Yall still not showin improvement....
Drop...
This is where I make, right here...
Thread: Battle Rap: Freestyle Only (1,926 Replies, 6,165,079 Views) by Tyler6270
I'm back for battle raps to end a fight started
Comin in strong, you only half-hearted
Heartless, not even dearly departed
You write whack raps go back to startin
Done with amateurs here for...
Thread: Relentless (2 Replies, 2,903 Views) by Tyler6270
Yeah man I mean this should be a rough draft for sure dude, this is good material for a song, all you have to do is spice it up and use a little more delivery and wordplay, this could be great if you...
Thread: First Legit "Song" want feedback (4 Replies, 3,413 Views) by Tyler6270
Nah man everyone starts somewhere, the only reason I keep rapping is because I HAVE seen improvement from since I've started, I'm trying to work my way up to SBU's level lol. Read his lyrics, and...
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,797 Views) by Tyler6270
Understandin the wordplay in the worst way shows in your raps
Thought to myself "not even popeye's spinach can help that"
Christ died twice and nobody heard from him since
Guess this rap is just...
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,797 Views) by Tyler6270
Think,
You ain't sick you the vaccine
Ain't been polished but my game still gleams
Too clean to bestow power onto one with half a face
Call me two-faced but my love is replaced, vengeance...
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,797 Views) by Tyler6270
Stoppin reactions like neutron absorbers
not the crazieest in the game just hangin' on the border
belittle any mc trying to test my mettle, trying to claim black to the kettle?
Outta sight n...
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,797 Views) by Tyler6270
SupaHotFire done been blowed out, kids a nobody lets show him what it's about
Cool him down with my first four lines, then I start droppin the slay-time rhymes.
Done playin' around with low lyrics...
Thread: Everybody hate ME (3 Replies, 2,836 Views) by Tyler6270
Not a terrible piece man, but it's not great either. Definitely need to work on the amount of wordplay, and more metaphors, try to think of crazy ****, like for ex. from Rhyme Asylum: "If I did start...
Thread: Lemme throw up dis cypher beat READ GOOD IDEA?! (0 Replies, 2,089 Views) by Tyler6270
Throw up this here beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iHJs0Wq82fY
Then! I type the time I stopped my freestyle, and someone does their's on the point on, and posts the time they stopped ect.. :)?...
Thread: heres a title.anyone free to post a relevant verse...infidelity. (11 Replies, 11,654 Views) by Tyler6270
Someone write one, because no way in hell am I following that up. Lmao. Good stuff guys.
Thread: Idiots (5 Replies, 1,723 Views) by Tyler6270
20k+ views on MORE THAN ONE piece of work means people find me good, or obviously it would have the usual 100-200 views most of the works do.
Not once did I state that a view makes me good therefore...
Thread: Idiots (5 Replies, 1,723 Views) by Tyler6270
Lol. My posts on here have 20k+ views. You know why? Because my work is ****ing good. You're ignorant. My level of maturity is low because people that were PREVIOUSLY posting in the rap section now...
Thread: Idiots (5 Replies, 1,723 Views) by Tyler6270
The rap section is at the top of this forum page in a sub forum
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,797 Views) by Tyler6270
Dearest Trina Marie, can you read?
I said savage not salvage dead beat
But please criticize a man with flow and a beat, but be sure your ready to tame before unleashing the beast
I feast on mc's...
Thread: Falling to pieces (5 Replies, 2,970 Views) by Tyler6270
Em is into some MAD assonance and consonance.. he has mad flow too, never checked out his syllable count though.
Thread: Vanilla Sky (4 Replies, 3,458 Views) by Tyler6270
You should probably go critique other's works so they can critique yours and help keep the site alive.
Thread: Is this rap section dead (1 Replies, 2,732 Views) by Tyler6270
I was noticing that every time I post a new thread, ain't nobody criticizin' it, is this site dead?
I was writin' raps down in my head, and when I put 'em on here, there ain't any comments, is this...
Thread: Instawritten (0 Replies, 2,023 Views) by Tyler6270
I recycle zealous rappers like a bum with cans, I could drop ten records in a minute but still not advance, it's a joke what Hip Hop is all about when it's on mainstream, hell anymore there ain't...
Thread: Who am I (3 Replies, 2,773 Views) by Tyler6270
Anytime man!
Thread: Falling to pieces (5 Replies, 2,970 Views) by Tyler6270
Too many attempts to just rhyme. Have meaning with your words. Nasty end rhymes and drops come from thought into the lyrics, or a pun. Maybe even delve into the end rhyme you're about to drop my...
Thread: King of my world (1 Replies, 2,361 Views) by Tyler6270
I like the general idea of it man, as long as you try to keep it real and do what you ACTUALLY do then it's alright and this wasn't too bad. A lot of your end-rhymes are forced though man. Work on...
Thread: Life's Defeat (1 Replies, 2,768 Views) by Tyler6270
I like it but look up consonance and assonance, you have steady end rhymes but flow is MUCH more than just end rhymes man. You have the basics for end-rhyming down, and not EVERY line needs to rhyme,...
Thread: Who am I (3 Replies, 2,773 Views) by Tyler6270
Reminds me of Ace Hood kinda, well that's how I read it. I feel like your lines could use more syllable count and some better drops to keep the crowd going with that damn factor. This is some pretty...
Thread: Just a little quick something. (0 Replies, 1,825 Views) by Tyler6270
Open my lips and spit the flow so gna(ah)rly pull up to a pa(ah)rty in my spare fe(ur)ra(ah)rri as I smash lyrical pongs atari. Pull up a seat an' listen to the teach teach his master skills to a kid...
Thread: Logix here, new drop. Fresh edit, work in progress. (2 Replies, 1,830 Views) by Tyler6270
Bomb!!
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,797 Views) by Tyler6270
Venemology callin' out the best but he'll be put to rest like the the others that failed the test because you can't handle the strain or stress the pain of a pest in your side that calls you to...
Thread: Just something I'm thinking (3 Replies, 2,116 Views) by Tyler6270
Thanks for the criticism bro I appreciate it! And I wasn't angry, I just felt after 60 views I should have had at least one comment. Ya know lol?
Thread: Just something I'm thinking (3 Replies, 2,116 Views) by Tyler6270
Come on guys! Nothing!?!!
Thread: Just something I'm thinking (3 Replies, 2,116 Views) by Tyler6270
I wasn't in it just for the fame but the games changed
I gotta let my head hang... Thoughts deranged..
Everyone around me is runnin wild and it's strange
rap is slowly dying but which person can I...
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,797 Views) by Tyler6270
That was ill!!!!
Thread: LETS KICK THIS OFF: *Freestyle Cypher Thread* (diss the man above you) (69 Replies, 192,414 Views) by Tyler6270
Jimi got popp in his name because his dome ate my glock
I **** it back and make sure I hit it straight from the top
I'm ill when I drop i create goosebumps and manifest chills
You momma got that...
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,797 Views) by Tyler6270
Comin in droppin hot make sure I'm slayin
Brutally beaten, none of you be stayin
Thoughts seedin drop your body like heavy baggage
When I rip it up, I always tear it savage
You rhyme for eight...
Thread: Discussion: Rap Writing Techniques (45 Replies, 51,579 Views) by Tyler6270
Thanks SBU! I'm glad this was started! I have something to say, I don't know if it's really a tip or not, but don't rap about stories that aren't true to you. In my opinion I hate when a rap is...
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,797 Views) by Tyler6270
couragously tearin' through your newfound negativity
Politcally attackin' you for a profound positivity
When an emcee choke you can tip 'em a word
Actin' like you live better is straight absurd...
Thread: Looking for some pointers. (7 Replies, 2,541 Views) by Tyler6270
Haha my bad man. Been edgy lately, I apologize!
Thread: first song i wrot, please give me some feedback (3 Replies, 2,799 Views) by Tyler6270
Don't rap about stuff that isn't true. If you're going to tell a story tell one that relates to you. Don't make up fake **** in your song just to fill some space, also make sure to keep track of your...
Thread: Too real (12 Replies, 3,882 Views) by Tyler6270
I really like track two. I mean I do like track one but I think the story that you tell in track 2 is better. Good job man.
Thread: OneLuv A.K.A HomeGrown Productions (259 Replies, 57,649 Views) by Tyler6270
Hey man, I respect what you do and how you say it, but I think you should try telling a story next time you write a song man. Even if it's a series of small stories I think it would help you out a...
Thread: Looking for some pointers. (7 Replies, 2,541 Views) by Tyler6270
Lol. No. Yeah what SBU said I will take into consideration. But, I want to get this place off the ground. I've been here for almost two years now and I want a bigger group of people in here. Like...
Thread: Looking for some pointers. (7 Replies, 2,541 Views) by Tyler6270
Heck yeah! Thanks SBU! That helps a lot man! I'll definitely look into all of it and practice. I just think if we added a little bit more to the rap thread than just a battle thread it would get this...
Thread: Looking for some pointers. (7 Replies, 2,541 Views) by Tyler6270
I figured we should get like a starters thread pinned up or something. Like personally what do you guys do to create flow and rhythm? And what helps you pick which words you want to do and slant...