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Thread: Love In Blue (3 Replies, 12,312 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
This is very well-written.
Thread: Lessons (0 Replies, 23,145 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
(I've been out of the writing scene for a while, so I'm trying to get some ideas out of my mind and onto paper.)
I am not writing you to say hello, I am not here to ask about your day.
I am not...
Thread: When You Fall in Love With a Girl Who Can't Love You Back (SLAM piece) (0 Replies, 28,817 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
I didn’t care that I had a boyfriend.
I didn’t care that we had just met.
She was everything I’d ever wanted,
I just hadn’t known it yet.
When you fall in love with a girl who can’t love you...
Thread: Laura (SLAM poetry piece) (6 Replies, 28,647 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
We can only have so much luggage with us, and in bags, or i would have brought it with me. I literally had no way to get it to campus unfortunately. I did pick up a ukulele and have tinkered with it...
Thread: Laura (SLAM poetry piece) (6 Replies, 28,647 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Your encouraging words always melt my heart! Thank you so much for your kindness. I'm currently traveling (long story) so I don't have my guitar, but it's definitely a priority when I get home!
Thread: Too Good Looking (For Your Own Good) (8 Replies, 5,987 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Ooh this is so fantastic! Good to hear from ya buddy :D
"A million dollar body
With a ten cent brain"
REALLY packs a punch. I love it!
Thread: Metaphors (1 Replies, 20,095 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
You tell me that you love metaphors.
Your arms are castle walls, protective and looming,
Letting nothing escape.
Your lips are lava, leaving a trail of hot liquid
At my jawline where you kiss....
Thread: Little High Little Low! (3 Replies, 11,602 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Welcome! And nice to meet you :)
Thread: Song lyrics - I'll welcome your review! (5 Replies, 27,321 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
These 4 lines really struck me.
"Four walls and a roof might build a home,
But that means nothing when you feel alone.
Pent up envy spreads through your bones,
You wish you were made of stone."
Thread: Laura (SLAM poetry piece) (6 Replies, 28,647 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Thank you <3
Thread: "This Is Not A Note" (6 Replies, 3,136 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Always good to hear your latest. Keep rockin!
Thread: Brother (SLAM piece) 7/27/15 (0 Replies, 10,550 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
You share my blood, and my mother,
I call you brother
But I never thought I would call you a monster.
Like the shadows that creep on my walls at night,
Waiting for the right time snatch me from...
Thread: Laura (SLAM poetry piece) (6 Replies, 28,647 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
You say that you have to leave.
I physically hear those words as they sear through my eardrums,
Ricocheting like bullets off of a concrete wall,
But my mind cannot wrap around the fact that
You...
Thread: Bare Legs (SLAM poetry piece) (4 Replies, 8,558 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Thank you <3
Thread: Loved You Too Much (4/27/15) (4 Replies, 2,798 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Thank you, my friend! It's been an insanely busy couple of months, but I'm glad to be writing SOMETHING again. Working on a bit of SLAM poetry currently to try and shake things up :D It's good to be...
Thread: Bare Legs (SLAM poetry piece) (4 Replies, 8,558 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Wow. Thank you so much for the incredible feedback! It's much appreciated. :)
Thread: Loved You Too Much (4/27/15) (4 Replies, 2,798 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Thanks Jim, love hearing your feedback!
Thread: Loved You Too Much (4/27/15) (4 Replies, 2,798 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Day in, day out, this 9-5 work
Has got me feeling down.
Same 4 walls, same stale coffee,
Head keeps spinning round.
I was so wrapped up in an idea,
That I lost track of what was real.
When my...
Thread: Bare Legs (SLAM poetry piece) (4 Replies, 8,558 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
When your bare legs grazed mine beneath the sheets I felt butterflies
In between my thighs as you awoke sounds of ecstasy from deep within me.
I watched you watch me, drinking in the image of my...
Thread: I Sure Can Pick Em (1 Replies, 2,315 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
HA! Another classic. Loving it.
Thread: In A Moment (2 Replies, 3,957 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
I haven't seen you around here before, maybe I'm just late to the party!
Anyway, nice work. It's refreshing to read new work of talented individuals.
What really stuck out to me was:
But by the...
Thread: Letting Go (5/14/10) (3 Replies, 2,718 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
It makes me so sad to see because there are some incredible writers here who deserve sooo much more credit for what they do! It's good to see you around though. I always love hearing from you.
Thread: Take My Hand (12/8/14) (4 Replies, 2,792 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
I struggled with that line a bit! I wanted to keep the same format, but it just didn't work as well as I'd hoped. Perhaps I'll try to find something more appealing!
Thread: Stained (3 Replies, 3,239 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
There is some really great imagery in this piece.
Thread: Hello from the Midwest! (2 Replies, 6,692 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Welcomeeee :)
Thread: Hello Newbie from Bangladesh. (3 Replies, 6,440 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Welcome to both of you! :)
Thread: Cognition (4 Replies, 1,808 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Holy $@#& this is good stuff. Would definitely love to see you more often around here!
Thread: All Roads Lead To You (3 Replies, 2,577 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
This is so, so wonderful.
Thread: Dear Friend (1/1/15) (5 Replies, 3,683 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Thanks a ton, Jim! That means a lot :)
Thread: Dear Friend (1/1/15) (5 Replies, 3,683 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Thanks!
Thread: Dear Friend (1/1/15) (5 Replies, 3,683 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
**First writing of the new year, dedicated to a very close friend of mine.
Dear friend, your eyes are clouded,
You do not foresee the consequences
Of the words you are shouting.
I cannot...
Thread: Prison Cell (12/29/14) (8 Replies, 3,898 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
You guys are awesome.
I can see both sides of where you're coming from. Maybe I'll go back and add a verse to hint at a bit of background without giving too much away, that sounds like a fair...
Thread: Prison Cell (12/29/14) (8 Replies, 3,898 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Thank you both! :)
Thread: Own Worst Enemy (4 Replies, 2,849 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Wow. This is really powerful.
Thread: Friend Of The Family (3 Replies, 1,777 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
I can see this song making millions, Jim!
Thread: Prison Cell (12/29/14) (8 Replies, 3,898 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Locked in this prison, these 4 walls my hell,
Clawing at the sheets, questioning myself.
I must escape, get me out of this mess,
I’ll do what it takes, except confess.
The words you were yet to...
Thread: Letting Go (5/14/10) (3 Replies, 2,718 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
I've held on, for just a little too long,
And now I read it on your face,
That you need your space.
You're drifting away to let me know,
That its time for me to let you go.
Letting go, letting...
Thread: Take My Hand (12/8/14) (4 Replies, 2,792 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
I think it makes more sense that way, yes, but I kinda like the rhyme too :P
Thread: Take My Hand (12/8/14) (4 Replies, 2,792 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
When dreams become nightmares
Like night becomes day
When promises fall apart
I’ll be the first to say
Take my hand, though it’s tough right now,
Through trials and tribulation,
We’ll figure...
Thread: Enough (11/18/14) (7 Replies, 2,514 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Jim, I guess she's your ex for a reason then!
JJCory, thank you so much! Good to hear from you :)
Thread: Enough (11/18/14) (7 Replies, 2,514 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
WOW! Two of my favorite people :) Thank you SO much!
Thread: Enough (11/18/14) (7 Replies, 2,514 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Feedback anyone?
Thread: forever (14 Replies, 4,642 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
I definitely agree! :D
Thread: forever (14 Replies, 4,642 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
I was thinking around the same! Three Days Grace and Rise Against came to mind!
Thread: Sitting In A Bar In Downtown Nashville (2 Replies, 2,260 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
This might be my favorite piece of yours, Jim.
Thread: forever (14 Replies, 4,642 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
I can totally see it!
Thread: forever (14 Replies, 4,642 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Love this! What genre are you thinking?
Thread: Sin Eater (4 Replies, 1,867 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
this definitely deserves more praise. what a gem!
Thread: break (4 Replies, 1,452 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
I love the idea of it. And I understand the concept. Hmm...I'm not sure how to explain it haha.
For instance,
"I look up to light
And all I see is surrounded by darkness"
doesn't exactly make...
Thread: Enough (11/18/14) (7 Replies, 2,514 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates
Walk in slamming the door,
Another day your heart grows colder.
I take the words you hit me with,
As if I deserve every punch.
Where flames once danced around us,
Now lie ashes.
The fire died...