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Thread: Innocence Lost {for curiosity_kills_the_cat} (2 Replies, 2,391 Views) by Debeaux
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Thread: Deleted (5 Replies, 1,495 Views) by Debeaux
Thanks Doug and RickyJoe, I can always count on the two of you to give me the confidence to keep writing
Thread: Juliana Street (9 Replies, 2,203 Views) by Debeaux
How many of us when going thru bad times have longed to escape to some special place we used to go as children? I like this, great job
Thread: You'll never see (14 Replies, 3,303 Views) by Debeaux
I think that this is really very good, it has a lot of feeling, and I think the last 3 lines of the chorus fit in nicely. Great job
Thread: Deleted (5 Replies, 1,495 Views) by Debeaux
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Thread: No Heart Of Stone (18 Replies, 2,732 Views) by Debeaux
John, Thank you for such an awesome compliment. Really makes the effort worth while.
Thread: Innocence Lost (4 Replies, 1,787 Views) by Debeaux
Thank you very much Obscured, I really appreciate the comments
Thread: Pragmatic Thoughts (4 Replies, 1,430 Views) by Debeaux
Don't know what to say, this is very, very good. Fantastic job
Thread: Always & Forever (4 Replies, 2,083 Views) by Debeaux
Fantastic, I think it belongs right here, this is just begging to be sung. Great work
Thread: No Heart Of Stone (18 Replies, 2,732 Views) by Debeaux
Doug, I decided go with No Heart Of Stone. As you pointed out tho Cold and Bitter Rain is a great title. I'd love to see what you can do with it.
Thread: Picture of Our Lives (5 Replies, 2,137 Views) by Debeaux
Excellent, that chorus is amazing. I'd really like to hear the music you wrote this to.
Thread: No Heart Of Stone (18 Replies, 2,732 Views) by Debeaux
Thanks Tania, I thought about If I had a Heart of Stone and also No Heart of Stone, I like them both but I do think Cold and Bitter Rain would make a great title. I stated before that most of the...
Thread: No Heart Of Stone (18 Replies, 2,732 Views) by Debeaux
I want to apologize to Doug for my comment to amaryn about writing a song entitled Cold and Bitter Rain. He is the one that suggested it would make a good title so he should be the one to use it....
Thread: I'll Be The Light (7 Replies, 1,933 Views) by Debeaux
Thank you very much. I really appreciate all the compliments and support I've been shown here. I'm glad someone is finally getting to see some of the things that I've written.
Thread: No Heart Of Stone (18 Replies, 2,732 Views) by Debeaux
Amaryn, I thought about adding another word and calling it No Heart of Stone. I liked Doug's suggestion of Cold and Bitter Rain, but that put me in the mind to write another song entitled, guess...
Thread: Innocence Lost (4 Replies, 1,787 Views) by Debeaux
Thanks RickeyJoe and Doug. I actually wrote this about a friend that I went to school with. Lost touch with him somehow over the years
Thread: I'll Be The Light (7 Replies, 1,933 Views) by Debeaux
Doug, I guess that would folk/country. I don't play an instrument but I usually have a melody in my head that I write to. I've always enjoyed folk music, my favorite singer/songwriter is Gordon...
Thread: Sometimes (5 Replies, 1,973 Views) by Debeaux
I have to agree, really strong chorus. It's all about love , sometimes, no truer words were ever spoken. Great job
Thread: Rewriting (7 Replies, 4,019 Views) by Debeaux
Thanks Doug. After rereading this a few times I think you and amaryn are right. I never thought of it as a Blues song but you're right, it could work.
Thread: Just A Teenager (9 Replies, 3,711 Views) by Debeaux
I was a teenager once, a long long time ago. That all sounds pretty familiar to me. Great job, really takes me back.
Thread: Innocence Lost (4 Replies, 1,787 Views) by Debeaux
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Thread: No Heart Of Stone (18 Replies, 2,732 Views) by Debeaux
Thanks Doug, I kind of thought that title had probably been used before, but I wasn't sure. Most of the lyrics that I have written I never took the time to title, so I've just been thinking up...
Thread: No Heart Of Stone (18 Replies, 2,732 Views) by Debeaux
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it
Thread: Haunt This Smokey Bar Room ( another slice of country pie for RickeyJoe) (5 Replies, 1,555 Views) by Debeaux
RickeyJoe When you reviewed my song Ozark Mountain Memories you said it was a slice of genuine pie, country flavored i assume. I really liked your comment so that's why I directed this one to you.
Thread: No Heart Of Stone (18 Replies, 2,732 Views) by Debeaux
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Thread: Model Behavior (9 Replies, 5,258 Views) by Debeaux
I really liked this, great work. Overpaid, getting laid, I'd settle for either one
Thread: I'll Be The Light (7 Replies, 1,933 Views) by Debeaux
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Thread: Haunt This Smokey Bar Room ( another slice of country pie for RickeyJoe) (5 Replies, 1,555 Views) by Debeaux
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Thread: My Wasted Heart (5 Replies, 1,994 Views) by Debeaux
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Thread: Rewriting (7 Replies, 4,019 Views) by Debeaux
Amaryn, Thank you for the honest opinion.
Thread: amaryn poetry and pics 2013 (318 Replies, 76,979 Views) by Debeaux
Wow, these are very very good. I like that they have a kind of rhythm to them
Thread: Just a thought (3 Replies, 3,843 Views) by Debeaux
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Thread: Rewriting (7 Replies, 4,019 Views) by Debeaux
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Thread: Ozark Mountain Memories (1 Replies, 1,092 Views) by Debeaux
Thanks. Oh yeah thats country, lol. Live just a stones throw away from Branson Mo
Thread: Last Stand (11 Replies, 3,107 Views) by Debeaux
I've read several of your post and they are all very good, a little dark for my taste, but very good all the same
Thread: Connection (10 Replies, 1,980 Views) by Debeaux
I thought it was really good, I really liked both of your chorus verses. Well done
Thread: Orphans Of The American Dream (by RickeyJoe and 2numbers) (5 Replies, 2,686 Views) by Debeaux
Not anything like the stuff I try to write, but I really liked it. Lot of truth in it, great job.
Thread: Always (3 Replies, 1,461 Views) by Debeaux
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Thread: Ozark Mountain Memories (1 Replies, 1,092 Views) by Debeaux
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