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new verse! feedback welcomed
Thread: new verse! feedback welcomed (5 Replies, 2,527 Views) by Original Syllable
I sh*t lyrics, you smell that ungodly stench on the verse, if you needed real rhymes I'm right here quenching your thirst, and not for the first time, when I go my spirit will put dents in a hearse,...
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New verse, check me out really quick
Thread: New verse, check me out really quick (2 Replies, 1,725 Views) by Original Syllable
Dynamically I'm battery acid, the craft has been mastered, laugh now and cry after, I form far from formulaic mosaics, kaleidoscopes of life, fueling the fire of hope and spiritual might, different...
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Please, can I get feedback on this verse? Intellectual critiques only
Thread: Please, can I get feedback on this verse? Intellectual critiques only (1 Replies, 1,727 Views) by Original Syllable
I'll cripple any hypocritical critic I'm sicced on, my words hit gongs as the vibrations spread to your brain stem, get out of the way while I spit insane phlegm and maim men, I'm the lion who claims...