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• I say we start a new forum. I can never find a...

  Thread: Goodbye Rap Lyrics Forum (6 Replies, 4,840 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I say we start a new forum. I can never find a decent rap forum on the web that's not dead.
  
  PM me if you'd be interested.

• Duke Westlake Cypher Rap

  Thread: Duke Westlake Cypher Rap (0 Replies, 3,352 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Lyrics right here.
  
  It's eye-are-one, just gonna get some bars in./
  Got this **** flowin' even though i'm just startin'./
  Takin' control like it's Manifest Destiny./
  These other fools trippin'...

• Nah, I only posted it on youtube. I'll post the...

  Thread: Feedback on my raise the bar cypher entry? (2 Replies, 2,606 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Nah, I only posted it on youtube. I'll post the lyrics here though.
  
  New to this rap stuff, got it locked in hand cuffs./
  Wrote this **** straight off the dome like it's dandruff./
  Ever see a...

• Feedback on my raise the bar cypher entry?

  Thread: Feedback on my raise the bar cypher entry? (2 Replies, 2,606 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Here's a link to the video.
  
  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-ik2oLDHiU&lc=_59Z9CsZqkRg7bgNDNeeNT2PzeeiknPpnfomDtFU7g0&context=G2741ae1FAAAAAAAAAAA&feature=g-all-c
  
  Tell me what you think and...

• Pretty good for a quick one. Polish it up into a...

  Thread: Quick Freestyle . No feedback needed . (2 Replies, 1,406 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Pretty good for a quick one. Polish it up into a full verse and it'll be sick.
  
  Oh and I like how you used reverse psychology for feedback. As you can see it worked.

• I didn't even think the tournament was still...

  Thread: ir1 vs Tre_fly (9 Replies, 2,090 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I didn't even think the tournament was still going. I failed you guys sorry. lol
  
  Just for the heck of it i'll wing it right here.
  
  yo yo It's the eye-are-one, spit a verse and you're done....

• You guys suck.

  Thread: 16 bars I wrote (2 Replies, 2,273 Views) by ir1

  
  

  You guys suck.

• No feedback?

  Thread: 16 bars I wrote (2 Replies, 2,273 Views) by ir1

  
  

  No feedback?

• Poll: Multi's and internals do help. But it wasn't bad....

  Thread: 12 New Lines I'm Considering for a Recording - Thoughts? (6 Replies, 2,064 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Multi's and internals do help. But it wasn't bad. I say edit it before you record. You only want to record the stuff you're absolutely confident with.

• 16 bars I wrote

  Thread: 16 bars I wrote (2 Replies, 2,273 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Wrote it to this instrumental-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NPiLHfevfzQ
  
  I construct a fresh rhyme every time I get time./
  Make my brain create reactions like a f#ckin' enzyme./
  Beats playing in...

• checkin in

  Thread: Where are the real lyricists at? (7 Replies, 2,729 Views) by ir1

  
  

  checkin in

• How many of the contestants are still active? My...

  Thread: (**-- tourney --**) (20 Replies, 4,127 Views) by ir1

  
  

  How many of the contestants are still active? My opponent hasn't even posted yet.

• Who had the better punchlines in my opinion.

  Thread: who vs. shaadow: FINISHED AND OPEN FOR VOTES (12 Replies, 2,456 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Who had the better punchlines in my opinion.

• Thanks, I haven't seen him around though.

  Thread: ir1 vs Tre_fly (9 Replies, 2,090 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Thanks, I haven't seen him around though.

• Smoothtung Had better flow and clever punches....

  Thread: Smoothtung vs DuceDaMicRipper ~ FINISHED AND OPEN FOR VOTING (13 Replies, 3,309 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Smoothtung
  
  Had better flow and clever punches.
  
  But duce was pretty good too.
  
  Good job to both.

• Not exactly sure.

  Thread: sbu vs Deleterious (12 Replies, 2,746 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Not exactly sure.

• k here's 10 bars yoyo check it yo yo I'm...

  Thread: ir1 vs Tre_fly (9 Replies, 2,090 Views) by ir1

  
  

  k here's 10 bars
  
  yoyo check it yo yo
  
  I'm rippin vicious bars, you're swimmin with the great whites./
  I'm a heat seekin' missile comin towards the way tre flies./
  It's the element of surprise,...

• looks like i gotta whip out a verse first -.-

  Thread: (**-- tourney --**) (20 Replies, 4,127 Views) by ir1

  
  

  looks like i gotta whip out a verse first -.-

• ir1 vs Tre_fly

  Thread: ir1 vs Tre_fly (9 Replies, 2,090 Views) by ir1

  
  

  You can start.

• I put up brackets. Start your own battle threads....

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I put up brackets. Start your own battle threads. Each round has a 4 day deadline.

• Just one more. Cool he'll be our last...

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Just one more.
  
  
  Cool he'll be our last contestant.

• We're just waiting to have a total of 8...

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  We're just waiting to have a total of 8 contestants before we start.

• I'll trust you on that and add him to the list.

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I'll trust you on that and add him to the list.

• ok we just need 2 more.

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  ok we just need 2 more.

• Some Freeverse I was working on today.

  Thread: Some Freeverse I was working on today. (0 Replies, 1,503 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I did this one to DJ Premier's "Boom" Instrumental.
  
  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CiQ-DNpsZ18
  
  I convert my thoughts with the tip of a pen./
  Spit it again, but every time my mission extends./...

• It's text but honestly I couldn't find the flow...

  Thread: francis (2 Replies, 1,473 Views) by ir1

  
  

  It's text but honestly I couldn't find the flow on this. More internals would have been better I think. Keep it up though you have some good rhymes.

• I kind of wrote this while tired and i'll admit...

  Thread: Sometimes I wonder (short drop) (2 Replies, 1,330 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I kind of wrote this while tired and i'll admit it's really forced. Had coffee and stayed up writing.

• Sometimes I wonder (short drop)

  Thread: Sometimes I wonder (short drop) (2 Replies, 1,330 Views) by ir1

  
  

  yoyo lyrical ****...just kidding.
  
  Sometimes I wonder why I even attempt this rap sh!t./
  Am I fake like plastic? Will people look past it? /
  Or maybe the game be just a little too drastic,/...

• I like the rhyme scheme and vivid imagery. But...

  Thread: feedback? (9 Replies, 1,770 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I like the rhyme scheme and vivid imagery. But the way you organized your bars made it hard to read and put a flow on it. It was sort of all over the place imo. Good drop though.

• 3 more and we'll have an even number for brackets.

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  3 more and we'll have an even number for brackets.

• We need a couple more sign ups to make this...

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  We need a couple more sign ups to make this interesting.

• nope not too late. I should make a deadline...

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  nope not too late. I should make a deadline though for sign ups.

• ok got it

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  ok got it

• I'm assuming everybody who posted is interested...

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I'm assuming everybody who posted is interested in joining. If that's the case i'll start a list.
  
  Ir1
  Tre_fly
  Who
  Smoothtung

• Sounds good. Keeping it small would be best so...

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Sounds good. Keeping it small would be best so either 4 or 8 participants.

• It wouldn't hurt to try again.

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  It wouldn't hurt to try again.

• Rap Battle Tournament

  Thread: Rap Battle Tournament (29 Replies, 4,881 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I don't see why we can't try something like this.
  
  How will this work?
  Each mc will be against another. It will be simple bracket style elimination. Use your hardest bars, punchlines, or whatever...

• Obviously a written. He posted it -_-

  Thread: strive (3 Replies, 1,323 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Obviously a written. He posted it -_-

• My bars constantly haunt the beat, make any emcee...

  Thread: cypher (Everybody needed-Join in) (40 Replies, 9,414 Views) by ir1

  
  

  My bars constantly haunt the beat, make any emcee against me obsolete.
  Others collapse under pressure, but under any measure you'll find me on my feet.
  Not a common feat but honestly who's hot as...

• thanks bro. Anything I could improve on though?

  Thread: 8 bars looking for feedback (5 Replies, 1,833 Views) by ir1

  
  

  thanks bro. Anything I could improve on though?

• Thanks for the feedback man. Just trying to...

  Thread: 8 bars looking for feedback (5 Replies, 1,833 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Thanks for the feedback man. Just trying to improve and all.

• Any feedback

  Thread: 8 bars looking for feedback (5 Replies, 1,833 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Any feedback

• ok yoyoyo yo check it lol yo I spit 16 rounds...

  Thread: Anyone and everyone battle me. (10 Replies, 3,229 Views) by ir1

  
  

  ok yoyoyo yo check it lol
  
  yo I spit 16 rounds from a gun. c0ck and reload bustin lyrical puns
  tre-fly's done before we even begun. The verses I disperse put him on the run.
  Don't need hype sh!t....

• I didn't really get where this was goin at. No...

  Thread: LO and give some feedback (2 Replies, 1,454 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I didn't really get where this was goin at. No real subject but it's good for starters if you're starting out.

• 8 bars looking for feedback

  Thread: 8 bars looking for feedback (5 Replies, 1,833 Views) by ir1

  
  

  I'm an, aspiring activist with some reactive fist,
  nuclear punchlines that define who this rapper is.
  Intellectually sound, i'm a human abacus
  that spits poetry while blowin trees as I master...

• http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xkSEv0inUKE&list=FL...

  Thread: Lyrical song of the day (2 Replies, 1,265 Views) by ir1

  
  

  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xkSEv0inUKE&list=FL5w8Ovxn70m32TsVawg4L8w&feature=mh_lolz
  
  lyrical song ^

• Try multi syllable rhyming and internal rhymes. ...

  Thread: Feedback on my rap (2 Replies, 1,339 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Try multi syllable rhyming and internal rhymes.
  
  Then after that move on to applying wordplay.

• Thanks for the feedback. Helps a lot.

  Thread: Some bars I made. Criticism is wanted. Oh and advice too. (4 Replies, 1,701 Views) by ir1

  
  

  Thanks for the feedback. Helps a lot.

• any feedback?

  Thread: Some bars I made. Criticism is wanted. Oh and advice too. (4 Replies, 1,701 Views) by ir1

  
  

  any feedback?

• Some bars I made. Criticism is wanted. Oh and advice too.

  Thread: Some bars I made. Criticism is wanted. Oh and advice too. (4 Replies, 1,701 Views) by ir1

  
  

  First dose of hip hop's the Illmatic, and i'm still at it, /14
  creating lines like a coke addict but it's so tragic, /14
  how under grown faggots make the blown status,/11
  known on the whole atlas,...