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Thread: The Love That Never Dies (0 Replies, 4,198 Views) by cashpapa
[Verse 1]
They all are weepin side by side
They wont let go of that veil no not tonight
Lookin for lightnin right in the dark
Someone tell them that inside them theres a spark
Not into...
Thread: Take me Away (1 Replies, 2,854 Views) by cashpapa
[Chorus]
Take me away
To another place
A totally different space
Take me away
Thread: Give me the Pleasure (0 Replies, 2,441 Views) by cashpapa
This is a song I'm working on.Tell me what you think.
[Verse 1]
Well,I don't read intentions
And this girl is no exception
Left me track her for inspection
She has got me go
Can't leave her all...
Thread: Call You Back(newer version) (0 Replies, 2,694 Views) by cashpapa
This is a break-up song that I'm working on.Feedback is quite appreciated.
[Verse 1]
I'll be after you in just a minute
I'm on somethin' new,without a limit
Sent too many texts and they are...
Thread: Call You Back (0 Replies, 2,950 Views) by cashpapa
This is a break-up song that I'm working on.Feedback is quite appreciated.
[Verse 1]
I'll be after you in just a minute
I'm on somethin' new,without a limit
Sent too many texts and they are...
Thread: Passion (1 Replies, 6,586 Views) by cashpapa
really fits to be a poem.
Thread: Would like some thoughts on this verse I'm working on (1 Replies, 2,236 Views) by cashpapa
great one .
Thread: Life As We Know It (1 Replies, 8,950 Views) by cashpapa
Nice chorus, but the repetition of if you're becomes boring, so work on it.
Thread: I'm not a rapper, I was bored... (2 Replies, 49,103 Views) by cashpapa
I really liked the fifth and sixth line. nice job.
Thread: Karaoke Singers (1 Replies, 1,730 Views) by cashpapa
I liked the chorus. good job.
Thread: I love everything about her (4 Replies, 2,661 Views) by cashpapa
nice one, but it fits a poem rather than a song.
Thread: All Over You (0 Replies, 1,879 Views) by cashpapa
[Part 1]
New page, white and plain
Soon I’ll be turnin’ one again
Old days, past mistakes
Burnin’ like a fire wave
Roll that stone, pull it strong
I’ll be under your control
Chase me down,...
Thread: The Maze (a newer version) (1 Replies, 1,964 Views) by cashpapa
[Part 1]
Slow dont let your temper blow
Just keep that voice low
Were gonna make it
I just got the call
And its a little wrong
She said shes had enough
The tone is playing
It never gets old...
Thread: All Over You (0 Replies, 1,880 Views) by cashpapa
All Over You
[Part 1]
New page, white and plain
Soon I’ll be turning one again
Old days, past mistakes
Burning like a fire wave
Roll that stone, pull it strong
I’ll be under your control...
Thread: I Dreamed I Was Playing Poker With Merle Haggard (2 Replies, 2,532 Views) by cashpapa
Very nice lyrics for a poem, really creates a medieval ambience.
Thread: loveshot( a newer version) (0 Replies, 2,741 Views) by cashpapa
LOVESHOT
[Part 1]
It only strikes me when I’m mutterin
Right when the mornin birds are flutterin
With words so loud that glass be shatterin
(With words)
With words I shouldn’t say
With words I...
Thread: Numbered (2 Replies, 1,767 Views) by cashpapa
I like the rhythm of this. You can feel there is a melody just by reading it once.
Thread: The maze (0 Replies, 1,384 Views) by cashpapa
THE MAZE
[Part 1]
Slow, don’t let your temper blow
Just keep that voice low
She’s gonna make it
I just got the call
And it’s a burning coal
She said she fell in love
The tone is ringing
It...
Thread: Wiser (0 Replies, 1,958 Views) by cashpapa
WISER
[Part 1]
Inside the room there’s I and me
Yet I could fly with ecstasy
So soon my love is gonna flee
Close the door before you leave
My status is sad emoji
Pleasure in the tragedy...
Thread: Loveshot (2 Replies, 2,012 Views) by cashpapa
You aint dumb, do not be timid, that's usually my thing. Thanks for your reply, I really heed the comments of the browsers.
Thread: Loveshot (2 Replies, 2,012 Views) by cashpapa
[Part 1]
I’m mutterin
Oh like a mornin bird I’m flutterin
With words so loud that glass be shatterin
With words
With words I shouldn’t say
With words I shouldn’t play
I’m wanderin
Just like...