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Thread: Do You Think That I Don't Know (1 Replies, 5,494 Views) by Justin Cayce
Do You Think That I Don't Know - Justin Cayce cc2016
Do you think that I don't know
Do you think that I don't know
I can see it in your eyes
Ain't got no time for alibis
Do you think that I...
Thread: Untitled (If it's beautiful) (1 Replies, 11,206 Views) by Justin Cayce
You seem to drift a lot from the anti-white message.
Thread: OG eXCEL - FIRST UP (1 Replies, 4,893 Views) by Justin Cayce
iT'S A Lot 2 re'mber
Thread: I Just Want Money (1 Replies, 3,458 Views) by Justin Cayce
This is a really sad song about the need for greed. My first thought was, "Is there no better reason to run for senator?" The song is an indictment on capitalism putting people wrong.
Thread: Decade (1 Replies, 2,860 Views) by Justin Cayce
This is some of your best work. Love the rhymes.
Are you sure the beat doesn't allow for "Grandpa said life is too short"?
Nothing really wrong with "Grandpa said... Life is short"? Up to you, of...
Thread: All I Need - Justin Cayce (0 Replies, 2,831 Views) by Justin Cayce
[You can place "him" instead of "her", - if you like...]
To see her smile
In a casual style
That right there is all I need
It always gets me through
Ano...ther day
And it leads me to believe...
Thread: Now That I'm Myself Again (2 Replies, 1,837 Views) by Justin Cayce
Now That I’m Myself Again - another ballad (to my ear).
Dm G / Am C
Dm G / C Am
repeat ― ad lib
Dm G
Now that I’m myself again
C Am
Thread: Something (1 Replies, 2,702 Views) by Justin Cayce
Have I overdone it at the very end? All suggestions appreciated.
You can tell me you love me
But the way is not the words
Maybe it’ll help you
If I say what I’m lookin’ for
I want something...
Thread: I Never See The Same Person Twice (1 Replies, 1,997 Views) by Justin Cayce
Hate to suggest words when it's your creation, but I think I know what your getting at and it would be more upbeat at the end to change "
look into their eyes, feeling their pain." to " Share their...
Thread: I Hate Women (2 Replies, 2,268 Views) by Justin Cayce
Is this Blues style music. It might also work as strong Rock.
Thread: In A Moment (2 Replies, 3,826 Views) by Justin Cayce
Okay. I thought the second verse was a little weak, but have I now overdone it?
I'm not fragile - honest opinions appreciated. [and I still has no real music]
In A Moment - v2(cc) Justin Cayce,...
Thread: Now That I'm Myself Again (4 Replies, 2,047 Views) by Justin Cayce
Sorry that I haven't been around for a while.
Thank you guys for the real positive feedback on my lyrics.
Thread: Now That I'm Myself Again (4 Replies, 2,047 Views) by Justin Cayce
I've put some tentative chords to this that seem to work. But maybe a "Dm" is too blue...
However, I'm frankly, too musically uneducated to transpose chords. ...
Thread: Brothers True (2 Replies, 1,703 Views) by Justin Cayce
This is probably just about final now.
Thanks to all you guys who commented in it.
Brothers True ― Justin Cayce
You can prise my gun out-of my cold, dead hand
Out-of my cold, dead hand,...
Thread: Beautiful Night (4 Replies, 1,775 Views) by Justin Cayce
Excellent work. Very solid. Lovely lyrical style. I can hear the music forming after only one reading. Again - Excellent work.
Thread: You Lighten My Life (1 Replies, 1,213 Views) by Justin Cayce
You Lighten My Life - Justin Cayce & Lisa
Ballad--Blues [for Ladies – change “Lady” to “Baby”]
Oh Lord I've been lost
For such a long, long time now
In the heart of the dark
And Lady it’s...
Thread: My first effort at writing lyrics (3 Replies, 1,953 Views) by Justin Cayce
Reminds me of Avril Lavignes stuff - but harder and more meaningful. I can hear a tune building in my mind as I read. Excellent work.
Justin
Thread: Love In Blue (3 Replies, 12,172 Views) by Justin Cayce
Love In Blue ―Justin Cayce
I listen every evening
To songs both old and new
Hoping to hear some words to say to you
But I never found the right ones
Thread: Far Too Strong - Justin Cayce (1 Replies, 1,891 Views) by Justin Cayce
Far Too Strong (4/4) ― Justin Cayce 2009 CC Some Rights Reserved
I can tell by the tears that my heart’s in a crush C / Em
And it’s just as I feared – that it never will hush C / A7
If it...