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• You Know The Way

  Thread: You Know The Way (1 Replies, 23,039 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Dearest friend, today I ask
  What is it you seek for so hard?

• Great lyric. Loved the last stanza. Tells the...

  Thread: Girls (10 Replies, 2,038 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Great lyric. Loved the last stanza. Tells the whole gist of it really!!

• Thank you all. Your words help me to write more...

  Thread: Efflorescence (5 Replies, 1,271 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Thank you all. Your words help me to write more and more. Thank you.

• Efflorescence

  Thread: Efflorescence (5 Replies, 1,271 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Efflorescence

• A really good lyric like this dosent need quid...

  Thread: The Stranger (12 Replies, 3,473 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  A really good lyric like this dosent need quid pro quo my friend. Its impressive enough in itself. So many chord progressions can make this a good song. I'm thinking it as a song with either a...

• Loved it. Makes me want to dance in the rain. ...

  Thread: Crazy In The Rain (10 Replies, 2,539 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Loved it. Makes me want to dance in the rain.
  
  "Breaking all the strings
  That once had you tied
  Broken up inside"
  
  These lines gave depth to Verse 2. Amazing work.

• Thanks a lot man. Really appreciate it.

  Thread: Crescent Moon of the Silent Night (15 Replies, 2,319 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Thanks a lot man. Really appreciate it.

• Loved it man. Steven Wilson has a long way to go!

  Thread: Crescent Moon of the Silent Night (15 Replies, 2,319 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Loved it man. Steven Wilson has a long way to go!

• Talking about The Watchmaker? With Guthrie?

  Thread: Crescent Moon of the Silent Night (15 Replies, 2,319 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Talking about The Watchmaker? With Guthrie?

• Do listen to porcupine tree. Amazing stuff. And...

  Thread: Crescent Moon of the Silent Night (15 Replies, 2,319 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Do listen to porcupine tree. Amazing stuff. And sorry to forget the door I'm a huge fan.

• Opposites Attract Yes,that's true But,I can no...

  Thread: Opposites Attract (32 Replies, 7,660 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Opposites Attract
  Yes,that's true
  But,I can no longer
  Be with you
  
  The simplicity of words is what i liked the best in this. Excellent lyrics. And you always rhyme it well :D

• Haha. Glad to hear that. Yeah a refrain is...

  Thread: Crescent Moon of the Silent Night (15 Replies, 2,319 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Haha. Glad to hear that. Yeah a refrain is undoubtedly. I'll make some changes. Thanks Doug. Your words help a lot. Really!

• Thanks! Appreciate it. Yeah the moon is indeed...

  Thread: Crescent Moon of the Silent Night (15 Replies, 2,319 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Thanks! Appreciate it. Yeah the moon is indeed fascinating.

• Thanks a lot doug. I know my pieces lack of...

  Thread: Crescent Moon of the Silent Night (15 Replies, 2,319 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Thanks a lot doug. I know my pieces lack of rhyme. But what I believe is that lyrics don't need to be bound by rhyme. My inspiration comes from many bands like pink floyd,led zeppelin, porcupine...

• Crescent Moon of the Silent Night

  Thread: Crescent Moon of the Silent Night (15 Replies, 2,319 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  When there's no place to go
  when there's no place to think
  just look up, you'll see
  
  the crescent moon of the silent night.

• I recited this. That's the main issue. Its very...

  Thread: The Lost Note (4 Replies, 3,494 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  I recited this. That's the main issue. Its very difficult to sing it. Will try and figure out a way though. And I appreciate that you liked it!!

• The Lost Note

  Thread: The Lost Note (4 Replies, 3,494 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  The Lost Note
  
  Sometimes, it just doesnt feel right
  you overlook that one little thing
  the one you're blinded by, day and night.
  
  Sometimes, that missing piece
  in this puzzle unsolved
  is all...

• You know Doug. You continue to amaze me! I loved...

  Thread: Honesty (55 Replies, 13,333 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  You know Doug. You continue to amaze me! I loved the fact that you kept it simple and yet said so many things with this one. Keep up the good work!

• @matt6660 glad to find another metalhead! Yeah I...

  Thread: Footsteps of Blood (9 Replies, 2,249 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  @matt6660 glad to find another metalhead! Yeah I am searching for a band to join!

• Thank you tania and amaryn. It means a lot to me...

  Thread: Footsteps of Blood (9 Replies, 2,249 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Thank you tania and amaryn. It means a lot to me that you liked it.
  Btw amaryn, didnt get your last sentence!!

• Thanks man. Really appreciate it.

  Thread: Let It Go (7 Replies, 1,813 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Thanks man. Really appreciate it.

• True man. Btw I seriously didn't understand the...

  Thread: Hired Gun (15 Replies, 4,009 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  True man.
  Btw I seriously didn't understand the rest of the part! I tried :-P

• Did it bro

  Thread: Let It Go (7 Replies, 1,813 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Did it bro

• ''Couldn't get enough of Her own reflection'' ...

  Thread: Hired Gun (15 Replies, 4,009 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  ''Couldn't get enough of
  Her own reflection''
  
  This one was too good. Nice work.

• Its good..try to add a bridge and then end with...

  Thread: Hope (4 Replies, 1,424 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Its good..try to add a bridge and then end with chorus

• Well written. Seriously its good.

  Thread: I Visit Me (5 Replies, 1,972 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Well written. Seriously its good.

• Thank you so very much doug. I feel good that you...

  Thread: Footsteps of Blood (9 Replies, 2,249 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Thank you so very much doug. I feel good that you liked this one. I have checked few of your posts and liked them too. I take inspirations from folk metal like ensiferum too. So you can say its a...

• Thanks Matt. Well i wrote this lyric keeping a...

  Thread: Footsteps of Blood (9 Replies, 2,249 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Thanks Matt. Well i wrote this lyric keeping a death metal kind of song in mind. I'm a aspiring musician and i hope to use these lyrics in my songs one day! Thanks you for your comments. Will check...

• Footsteps of Blood

  Thread: Footsteps of Blood (9 Replies, 2,249 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Footsteps of blood and death.

• The Lost Note

  Thread: The Lost Note (0 Replies, 1,431 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  To be reposted again with changes

• Beautiful. ' I keep find these things,traces...

  Thread: Strangest Places (6 Replies, 3,079 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Beautiful.
  ' I keep find these things,traces of you in the strangest places' simply awesome.

• Thanks man. Your suggestion taken. Will remove...

  Thread: Let It Go (7 Replies, 1,813 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Thanks man. Your suggestion taken. Will remove 'it'

• Let It Go

  Thread: Let It Go (7 Replies, 1,813 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  There were times when I had enough.
  to feel happy, was really tough.
  I was falling, thinking no one will catch me.
  but I was wrong, oh yeah.
  
  you didn't see what I had for you.
  it was painful,...

• Good work man. Gives a nice rhyme in the head.

  Thread: Own Up (10 Replies, 2,059 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Good work man. Gives a nice rhyme in the head.

• Thanks to all who liked it. Just to make it...

  Thread: Are You There, God? (8 Replies, 1,878 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Thanks to all who liked it.
  Just to make it clear I am not anti god. Its just I haven't found him yet. I never felt his presence or his support when I needed him. Its a song I wrote for I hope to...

• Nice. Could have used some different kinda words...

  Thread: the end (4 Replies, 2,101 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Nice. Could have used some different kinda words , like give it a gloomy touch.
  But altogether great work

• Are You There, God?

  Thread: Are You There, God? (8 Replies, 1,878 Views) by Malay_razor

  
  

  Are you really there?