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Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 358,883 Views) by roses4ria
Ka-me-ha-meha
Thread: Set My Soul (0 Replies, 1,207 Views) by roses4ria
It's been a while. Lmk your thoughts.
Is there anybody out there?
Can anyone here me?
Is there anybody out there?
Aren't you listening?
I've been looking for a long time,
Searching for...
Thread: Not Asking (9 Replies, 1,961 Views) by roses4ria
Love this.
Thread: You're everything (1 Replies, 1,581 Views) by roses4ria
Craving for the lips
That I have never had
Oh Lord please forgive me
As our kiss remains in tact
You're everything
You're everything
That I could ever need
You take the shackles from my...
Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 358,883 Views) by roses4ria
Why yes that last thing you mention actually hhas happened to m. Except for right after it started lightly raining I just sucker punched him int the mouth cause I could see in his beady little eyes...
Thread: Scratch (1 Replies, 1,462 Views) by roses4ria
I'm not sure if
"A scratch in time
Of the world's perception
But a tragedy
To my mind's deception"
is needed a second time??
Thread: Scratch (1 Replies, 1,462 Views) by roses4ria
Let me know your opinions..I'm not sure my what I think of this yet so be brutally honest please..
I feel as if
I am just a story
No eternal light
Or everlasting glory
A scratch in time
Of...
Thread: Fire and Ice (7 Replies, 3,124 Views) by roses4ria
Honestly, this is amazing.
"Raise your eyes to the sky
I'll be looking there too,
Stare into the oceans depth,
I'll search the flames for you"
My favorite part. Absolutely phenomenal. I could...
Thread: You and Me (7 Replies, 2,217 Views) by roses4ria
Wow. This is a really beautiful song. I feel every word that you say and all the verses choruses and bridges blend so well. I love this.
Thread: Fingertips (4 Replies, 1,701 Views) by roses4ria
Thank you so much. That means so much from both of you. I have always wanted to publish my writing but I really don't know how to go about it. Do you have any suggestions?
Thread: Fingertips (4 Replies, 1,701 Views) by roses4ria
Just wrote this..kind of a new style for me I guess. Let me know what you think about it!
I've been writing these words for a while now
Every time I think of your face
So I haven't been able...
Thread: Like to fly (2 Replies, 1,632 Views) by roses4ria
I love this. I feel it really gives a good perception on the world today and how we're being run by the gov't and media as mindless beings. Maybe you had a different idea though? Either way, Good job.
Thread: Silent Curse (4 Replies, 2,005 Views) by roses4ria
It wasn't really written to any music..but I guess I'd like it to have a more acoustic feel
Thread: Silent Curse (4 Replies, 2,005 Views) by roses4ria
Thanks :) That means a lot to me. I thought about pursuing it at one point but everything is still up in the air for me :p
Thread: Silent Curse (4 Replies, 2,005 Views) by roses4ria
When we are over
And you're six feet underground
I'll fill my core with silence
I will not make a sound
No words
No sounds
Just air
Comes out
My mouth
Thread: A Bitter Story (0 Replies, 1,399 Views) by roses4ria
My feelings are underestimated
My love is deemed as blind
The pain I have is understated
For reasons I've yet to unwind
My lover turned cold and angry
But why I cannot say
His eyes once...
Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 358,883 Views) by roses4ria
Thank you. Both of of you! I finally feel I will be able to settle things, internally and otherwise. I don't think I could have figured it out without your help and I really appreciate it. You both...
Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 358,883 Views) by roses4ria
Thanks..that helps a lot actually. I have talked to him about my feelings and it has only gotten worse. I know im gonna have to end up walking away and shutting him out but im not quite prepared for...
Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 358,883 Views) by roses4ria
Hey so..I don't mean to be a downer with all of this awesomely awesome stories but.. ( i just need some advice )
ever feel given up on by those that promised they'd be there?
How are you supposed...
Thread: The Monster (1 Replies, 1,794 Views) by roses4ria
I just wrote this like 5 minutes ago..tell me what you think!
Everything is vague
A walking dreamland in my mind
I am but a plague
Screaming to be left behind
Before the black covers my body...
Thread: Drowned Out Love (3 Replies, 1,337 Views) by roses4ria
Thanks! I've tried writing choruses to my lyrics before but it feels like I always ruin it when I do.
Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 358,883 Views) by roses4ria
That is the greatest story I have ever read
Thread: Frozen (0 Replies, 1,187 Views) by roses4ria
Let me know what you think!
I am frozen.
In time.
Pain.
Disorientation.
In desperate need
Of rehabilitation.
Thread: Drowned Out Love (3 Replies, 1,337 Views) by roses4ria
Here's a new one..feedback is always appreciated :)
Your anger could move mountains
My sorrow changes weather
Your jealousy is frightening
But my agony is better
There's been a gray sky...
Thread: fire and ice (1 Replies, 1,366 Views) by roses4ria
Friendship
breaks
hearts
As
love
breaks
trust.
Fire
burns
cold
Thread: Peaceful Tsunami (3 Replies, 1,848 Views) by roses4ria
As I see your face in my head
I can feel my heart palpate
It beats hards against my chest
And the world creates an earthquake
The trees fall from the lightening crack
The powerlines are blown...
Thread: Poisonous Fountain (0 Replies, 1,352 Views) by roses4ria
My head hurts harder than my heart
These words keep sticking to my mouth
I'm walking the line of spontaneous combustion
Left here to sip from this poisonous fountain
It seeps down my throat and...
Thread: Conflict Of Interest (Acoustic) (3 Replies, 1,465 Views) by roses4ria
This is really good. It's deep and powerful and the title itself got me interested. It tells a story and portrays nicely how you feel. Great job.
Thread: Death Becomes Her (4 Replies, 1,652 Views) by roses4ria
Thanks! That means a lot to me. I've been writing forever but was soo apprehensive about posting them for others to see :x
Thread: Death Becomes Her (4 Replies, 1,652 Views) by roses4ria
All at once it was released
My feelings for you are now deceased
There's no sense of life
Not even a twitch
I kicked them out of my heart
and into a ditch
There they will stay
For the rest...
Thread: Queen of Roses (1 Replies, 1,409 Views) by roses4ria
Hey so, I'm kinda new to this but have been writing forever..I just wanna know if my stuff is any good. Thanks.
Maybe no one well ever tame me
They sure as hell aren't gonna save me
And I...