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Thread: Incompatible (6 Replies, 1,933 Views) by Lm_Rich
I like it! XD
Thread: I Got Love (0 Replies, 1,205 Views) by Lm_Rich
Im broke-
Cant hold a steady job.
Im alone-
Evryone i know-
Just puts up with me-
They dont care you see-
If i wind up dead on the side of the street
But i got the one thing that matters...
Thread: Pills and Needles (1 Replies, 1,488 Views) by Lm_Rich
I like it. Ive never had any problems wit drugs but friends of mine strugle (nd im 15)i i write about their addiction. I have on song im finishing up. I have a friend who is 16 and struggling with a...
Thread: Memories of You and I (my first song) (5 Replies, 2,160 Views) by Lm_Rich
Its pretty good for a first song. Hav u heard of all time low? As i was reading the lyrics i was imagineing the music in my head. It sounded like anamazing pop punk ballad! Oh and try getting a 3/4...
Thread: I'm No Animal (4 Replies, 1,829 Views) by Lm_Rich
I agree. Take out some off the lines. Try to get a clear cut message. It seems to be two song in one so try to split it up.
Thread: I need inspiration, please help (4 Replies, 2,066 Views) by Lm_Rich
Close your eyes + think of the one thing that drives you crazy whether its good crazy or bad crazy. Think about how your life would be with or with out it. Think about how its affected the person you...
Thread: To Hell With You (9 Replies, 2,445 Views) by Lm_Rich
Dude from seeing some of your post i thought u werent serious songwriting. But dammmnnn that was one great song. I am now a believer in the shadow magic * bows down* we need to collab!
Thread: Your heaven is my hell(rate plz) (5 Replies, 2,153 Views) by Lm_Rich
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Thread: Loved you all my life (1 Replies, 4,317 Views) by Lm_Rich
This is pretty good song. The lines are not too short and not to long which is really surprising for a beginner. Just remember when u writing act like ur havin a conversation with a person and this...
Thread: F* you to the naysayer (0 Replies, 1,345 Views) by Lm_Rich
Little freestyle i came up wit. Ist like my f- you to everyone who said i cant.
You say i write songs
I call it my life.
You say i wont amount to sh*t
And maybe you're right .
But the...
Thread: God, I hate you. (4 Replies, 2,696 Views) by Lm_Rich
Damn thats good. Ppl can relate to this man this is wat american rap lacks the truth. Keep it up
Thread: Your heaven is my hell(rate plz) (5 Replies, 2,153 Views) by Lm_Rich
Hey man im still in high school! I get wat your saying cause the average song that is being played is 16 bars. But check out john mayers dreaming with a broken heart lyrics its not the usually 16...
Thread: Your heaven is my hell(rate plz) (5 Replies, 2,153 Views) by Lm_Rich
Thanxs =) yeah the music draws it out a bit there is a guitar solo between the 2nd verse nd the chorus
Thread: Your heaven is my hell(rate plz) (5 Replies, 2,153 Views) by Lm_Rich
Verse
Im walkin out/no regrets/dont want my life to be a mess/the longer i stay/ the harder it gets/do wanna put up with your bullsh*t/ why cant you just leave me be/
Chorus
Your heaven is my...