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Thread: Flame (8/13/14) (8 Replies, 3,314 Views) by Inskeepruler
I definitely like the fire element of this. I especially like the shift from wanting the person to realizing that you only wanted the embrace.
Thread: Amen Omen (2 Replies, 2,050 Views) by Inskeepruler
Something like that. It's about the hypocrisy found in all religions, but mainly in Christianity because it is what I see the most. I was working on a new riff, and these lyrics really fit the mood.
Thread: Small Salute (3 Replies, 2,356 Views) by Inskeepruler
Thank you. Yeah, I wrote this in honor of my father. He died when I was young. This song means very much to me. I poured a lot of feeling into it, and the words seemed to write themselves.
Thread: Small Salute (3 Replies, 2,356 Views) by Inskeepruler
Here is a song that I wrote in honor of my dad.
Verse:
The Giving Tree
You gave to me
Taught me what it means
To give up everything
I was a child
Thread: Amen Omen (2 Replies, 2,050 Views) by Inskeepruler
Here's a start to a song I'm writing:
Verse 1:
They line you up from your pews
Wash down that hollow vow with bread and juice
That sacred cow that burned for you
Up on that cross, he died for...
Thread: Little Things (0 Replies, 1,982 Views) by Inskeepruler
Hey, ATL. It's been quite a while. But, here's my latest work. Now I play guitar with my music. Much has changed over the last five years. I've included the chords with the lyrics, so maybe you all...
Thread: Another start for a lyric (3 Replies, 1,789 Views) by Inskeepruler
Changed and made into an actual song.
Thread: Contemplations Vo. 4 (4 Replies, 4,017 Views) by Inskeepruler
Hmm... two years have passed. I believe it's time for another volume.
Thread: Moon Between the Mountains (12 Replies, 6,835 Views) by Inskeepruler
I've always loved your style. Also, I'm back lol.
Thread: Twin Flames (3 Replies, 3,282 Views) by Inskeepruler
Thanks! As far as A Brief Exchange, I actually wrote that a few hours ago while taking a walk. I made it ambiguous, but it is about a mosquito. Lol.
Thread: Twin Flames (3 Replies, 3,282 Views) by Inskeepruler
Just as two twin flames eternally burn
You and I shine bright, while the cosmos turn.
But we know not that the other exists
Much less the way our energies persist.
Blinded not by sight, but by...
Thread: My mind's eye (1 Replies, 1,111 Views) by Inskeepruler
This is really good. I think I like most how you separate yourself from the world in order to see it clearly for what it is becoming. Or maybe it is because you see what it is that you separate...
Thread: A Brief Exchange (2 Replies, 3,295 Views) by Inskeepruler
It has been a very long time since I have posted anything. So much has happened since then. But here you go, ATL. Also, comments/critiques are very much welcome.
How gentle her touch is as she...
Thread: Insert Catchy Title Here (3 Replies, 3,312 Views) by Inskeepruler
The darkness leaves, the light embraces me
It's hard to see, its piercing entity
It fills my soul with hope
To deal with the fear I cope
Envious as the light, it fades away
Some other place,...
Thread: Not Asking (9 Replies, 1,961 Views) by Inskeepruler
I like this. It's been awhile since I have been on ATL, and it's good to know that there are still great writers on here.
Thread: Breathless (7 Replies, 3,310 Views) by Inskeepruler
I love the verses and the bridge. However, I'm not a fan of the word "punch" in this context. It doesn't seem quite strong enough. I enjoyed this.
Thread: I'm back ATL! (0 Replies, 1,885 Views) by Inskeepruler
In a life full of nothing
You learn with a wanting
That the end is not the end
In time you're outspoken
And reflect on all you've chosen
And realize it's all in the wind
Upon close...
Thread: Soon to be titled (0 Replies, 1,146 Views) by Inskeepruler
My dreams ain't real but they say to follow 'em
Pocket full of pills and I'm 'bout to swallow one
Chase it with some liquor to make that sh*t kick quicker
Then I'll kick it. 'Cause my mind is...
Thread: Tripping Through Time (0 Replies, 1,119 Views) by Inskeepruler
I am everyone, I am no one
There is no beginning, there is no end
None of this is real while none of this is fake
This an eternity of hell
Every possibility running through my mind
All...
Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 359,593 Views) by Inskeepruler
Haven't posted anything in a while. I'm going to have to get on that.
Thread: End the F*cking War! (1 Replies, 1,523 Views) by Inskeepruler
Today will mark a decade to the day we were attacked
A feat that laid our dumbstruck country right onto its back
And with the major leaders gone what are we fighting for
I have no answers just...
Thread: Realize (3 Replies, 1,660 Views) by Inskeepruler
The last line of the chorus, I think, would pause and then say "me. " I like this.
Thread: I See (5 Replies, 1,962 Views) by Inskeepruler
Damn this is good.
Thread: Review it. (3 Replies, 1,495 Views) by Inskeepruler
This is good. I like the word play. A couple of grammar errors, ie "your" and "you're, " but it flows smoothly.
Thread: who i am (1 Replies, 2,760 Views) by Inskeepruler
I like this. I enjoyed the word play with the scratched cd.
Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 359,593 Views) by Inskeepruler
It's crazy, I turned 19 on August, and I aspire to write like you shadow. That is AWESOME!
Thread: My Take On Heartbreak (1 Replies, 1,995 Views) by Inskeepruler
This is good. I like it. The Dr. Pepper joke made me chuckle.
Thread: The frog (2 Replies, 2,615 Views) by Inskeepruler
What? Lol
Thread: Juneyah vs. Sk'n Deep (Quarter Finals/Round 2) (34 Replies, 4,007 Views) by Inskeepruler
Damn that was great. Nice flow and stinging blows. Fantastic.
Thread: Untitled Love Song (1 Replies, 1,877 Views) by Inskeepruler
I like it. Generally, I wouldn't put a name in a love song, unless it's her. This way it is universal, but since it is for someone, I'm assuming, it works.
Thread: A Decade Since (3 Replies, 2,058 Views) by Inskeepruler
Thanks
Thread: A Hopeless Man's Hopefull Prayer (3 Replies, 4,064 Views) by Inskeepruler
With each passing day
This hole in my chest grows bigger
Am I wasting my life
This grave grows, I am the digger
One day I shall lie down
And I'll leave this plane forever
Perhaps this...
Thread: Cash vs. Space (ROUND 1) (32 Replies, 3,886 Views) by Inskeepruler
Rap man...
Thread: A Decade Since (3 Replies, 2,058 Views) by Inskeepruler
Edited
Thread: Dying (9 Replies, 5,076 Views) by Inskeepruler
I love this, but honestly, my favorite part is "inzomnbia" Hahaha!
Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 359,593 Views) by Inskeepruler
I am a beautiful person. I have a ride on the Internet. The creator of the most important thing is that the information you need to be a good idea to have a lot of people who are not responsible for...
Thread: I Miss You (3 Replies, 2,212 Views) by Inskeepruler
It's so good to see you post something! I like how I recognize every name from your story. This almost brought a tear to my eye. (:^))
Thread: Hey Lyricist (1 Replies, 2,826 Views) by Inskeepruler
This is pretty cool. It's as if music is speaking to the person writing it.
Thread: She Don't Know (2 Replies, 1,725 Views) by Inskeepruler
Wow. I really like this. It went in a completely different direction in the chorus then I thought it would.
Thread: I Am Free (6 Replies, 2,572 Views) by Inskeepruler
I like this. I do.
Thread: A Decade Since (3 Replies, 2,058 Views) by Inskeepruler
I can't believe that it's been ten years
Since I watched my faith in God disappear
And as I watch the time grow near
I'm ready to get the hell out of here
And join you in a place where you...
Thread: Untitled yet again :-) (6 Replies, 2,680 Views) by Inskeepruler
I'm not sure what this is about. It just came to me.
Thread: Untitled yet again :-) (6 Replies, 2,680 Views) by Inskeepruler
Conflicting memories
Waiting for the sun to rise
Am I meant for this life forever
It's too hard to open my eyes
Constricting agony
Drowning in my own lies
Suffocating; without air
I don't...
Thread: review and let me have it you cruelly honest audience (7 Replies, 2,060 Views) by Inskeepruler
I would love to do a collaboration with someone on this forum. It would be cool to have someone who writes different than I to write something together.
Thread: New song by a brand new member (8 Replies, 2,744 Views) by Inskeepruler
I do enjoy seeing lyrics with a higher standard vocabulary than some posts on this site. Keep up the good work.
Thread: would anyone like to help me? (2 Replies, 3,522 Views) by Inskeepruler
Sure.
Thread: New song by a brand new member (8 Replies, 2,744 Views) by Inskeepruler
Post length varies, but good lyrics. My favorite lines are Damnation a damned nation.
Thread: new to the site and glad i found it (3 Replies, 1,675 Views) by Inskeepruler
This is really good and visual.
Thread: Another start for a lyric (3 Replies, 1,789 Views) by Inskeepruler
Added and edited. More later. :)
Thread: Goodbye (5 Replies, 2,985 Views) by Inskeepruler
I feel ya. I was gone for awhile also, but have been inspired by recent events.