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• Hi there! I don't think this is a line from a...

  Thread: sample I AM THE JAPANESE SANDMAN (1 Replies, 2,276 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! I don't think this is a line from a film sampled in the song, however I do believe it to be a line from the song "Rang tang ding dong"- by The Cellos, this song was however used in the...

• These lyrics in my opinion are really good, I...

  Thread: My Last Goodbye (2 Replies, 2,140 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  These lyrics in my opinion are really good, I especially like the chorus, you can relate to whats being said! I like the length of the verses as well, they are straight to the point not dressed up to...

• These lyrics could be really good however I'm...

  Thread: Last Seconds Missing (1 Replies, 1,689 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  These lyrics could be really good however I'm unsure about your opening line, it just doesn't seem like a way of opening a song, it's too random, however I feel the rest of your lyrics are written...

• This has the potential to be good however I feel...

  Thread: Bloodsucker (4 Replies, 1,610 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  This has the potential to be good however I feel it needs more work putting into it and more substance. The first verse doesn't really fit and there's too much rhyming in it, however it does get...

• Lol! That's ok! Glad to have helped! :D

  Thread: Courtney Love - Happy Ending Story (10 Replies, 12,005 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Lol! That's ok! Glad to have helped! :D

• Your welcome! That line that we're not sure on, I...

  Thread: Courtney Love - Happy Ending Story (10 Replies, 12,005 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Your welcome! That line that we're not sure on, I think is actually: 'Hey for every evil dumb lazy' I was flicking though the Courtney Love diaries and that line caught my eye seeming to fit in with...

• Try this... ther's not that many changes but it's...

  Thread: Courtney Love - Happy Ending Story (10 Replies, 12,005 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Try this... ther's not that many changes but it's corrected what needed to be! :D I'm not sure on the ending of the same line however lazy is definitley the last word in that line! Hope this has...

• hello there! These lyrics provoke so much...

  Thread: rap lyrics (criticism plz) (9 Replies, 4,146 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  hello there! These lyrics provoke so much imagery, they are really good, very visual, filled with emotion, I like them and you can empathise with the character. This might only be short but it is...

• Hi there! Those lyrics are really good, I love...

  Thread: First Lyrics (12 Replies, 17,231 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! Those lyrics are really good, I love the use of colours providing good imagery for the reader/listener, and the rhyming system through it is good giving it good rhythm! I really like this...

• Hey there Magic! That sounds like fantastic news!...

  Thread: Hello Everyone, I'm new (7 Replies, 1,534 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hey there Magic! That sounds like fantastic news! :D It's nice to hear of something like that! I hope that your learning of the Italian language goes well! I'm sure you'll be great at it by the end...

• Wow this is really good! it's such a powerful,...

  Thread: A Blank Page Of Memories! (please give opinions) (2 Replies, 1,493 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Wow this is really good! it's such a powerful, moving strong piece, filled with such emotion! I do feel that some of the lines don't quite flow as well as the rest, but otherwise it is very well...

• This is quite powerful writing! I like this maybe...

  Thread: New Song PLEASE COMMENT! (1 Replies, 2,042 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  This is quite powerful writing! I like this maybe needs an extra verse.. possibly but it's really good just as it is I like the shouting being thrown into the mix I think that that's the part thaht...

• These lyrics start off so well and they are well...

  Thread: A different corner (2 Replies, 2,052 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  These lyrics start off so well and they are well written througout however I feel it ends a bit abruptly, I think that possibly more needs adding to it, just to add more closure to it?

• I quite like this... it's very dark and...

  Thread: You belong to me (8 Replies, 5,241 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  I quite like this... it's very dark and different, it's like a stalker situation, definitley not something you'd hear in lyrics! I appreciate the writing it's good, insightful into a mind you're not...

• Hi there! Well the issue of what karma is about...

  Thread: Karma account (5 Replies, 1,865 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! Well the issue of what karma is about aside... I think that these lyrics are quite interesting! They took a bit to get into but I think once you get to the first chorus and go into the...

• Hey there Pedro (The Great) :D Welcome to the...

  Thread: Hey all :) (11 Replies, 1,853 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hey there Pedro (The Great) :D Welcome to the forums! Hope you enjoy your stay here! Have lots of fun! ;) Glad your enjoying the forums already! :D

• I know this may sound silly, however on a lighter...

  Thread: Love this girl, but she doesn't love me (probably)... Any suggestions? (14 Replies, 28,836 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  I know this may sound silly, however on a lighter note how about Wheatus-Teenage Dirtbag? :D

• I absolutely love this! Song or not! It's so...

  Thread: What I think is wrong with the world. (1 Replies, 1,753 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  I absolutely love this! Song or not! It's so powerful, honest and raw! It's very insightful and eye-opening! It's very well written! Absolutely brilliant! :D

• Very good! I like those lyrics! I'm not sure...

  Thread: Reset Myself (2 Replies, 2,099 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Very good! I like those lyrics! I'm not sure whether you'd want to repeat what appears to be the chorus again at the end, I'm unsure but otherwise I think that those lyrics are brilliant they feel as...

• Hello there! Welcome to the forums! Hope you...

  Thread: hola! im parrador! (6 Replies, 1,725 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hello there! Welcome to the forums! Hope you enjoy your stay! :D

• Hello there and welcome to the forums! Hope you...

  Thread: Greetings from Poland ;) (8 Replies, 2,669 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hello there and welcome to the forums! Hope you find all that you want here and enjoy your stay! :D

• Hello there and welcome to the forum! Happy...

  Thread: Hi (9 Replies, 1,663 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hello there and welcome to the forum! Happy posting!

• Hello there Little-Casper! I don't know if...

  Thread: Looking for teacher (1 Replies, 3,593 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hello there Little-Casper! I don't know if anybody else has replied to your request, however if they haven't, I am more than willing to help you with your request! Hope this is of help to you! :D

• Hi there! These lyrics have the potential to be...

  Thread: the real me (2 Replies, 1,532 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! These lyrics have the potential to be really good, I like what is written so far, it shows some depth to the person in the lyrics and has a potentially good theme to it, you normaly get a...

• Hi there! These are really good they show such...

  Thread: Get Back 2 U (reply to this one!!) (1 Replies, 1,608 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! These are really good they show such emotion and feeling, and an underlying depth to it, there is more than just one message to it, very cleverly done! It is also something that people can...

• Hi there! The lyrics are al really good! Very...

  Thread: Requesting reviews (1 Replies, 1,606 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! The lyrics are al really good! Very well written! Very powerful and at time moving as well especially the second song. It is all very cleverly written, leaving the audience to think about...

• Hi there! These lyrics are so good! I love them....

  Thread: Truth In The Lies (4 Replies, 2,657 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! These lyrics are so good! I love them. It sounds like it's coming from experience and even if it's not there are still alot of people who can relate to it still. Great quality of writing,...

• Hi! Well done on those! You just pipped me to the...

  Thread: hi everyone! (9 Replies, 3,811 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi! Well done on those! You just pipped me to the post! LOL! :D I agree with most of those lyrics however there are just a couple that I would question, these are, 'Love just pulled me down' I heard...

• I believe that music that is considered old, as...

  Thread: Old songs (6 Replies, 2,439 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  I believe that music that is considered old, as soulstice does is down to a persons age and generation, however, I would also agree that the earliest (currently) that a song could be considered old...

• Hello! And welcome to the forums! Your help will...

  Thread: :P hello! (8 Replies, 2,129 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hello! And welcome to the forums! Your help will be very much appreciated! Hope you enjoy your stay! :D

• Lol! It's a line I heard in a song, and I liked...

  Thread: Does Falling out of a fiftieth Story window always feel so good? (6 Replies, 2,674 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Lol! It's a line I heard in a song, and I liked it so I used it in my signature! In my understanding I guess it means do you actually have a purpose of your own that you are fulfilling or are you...

• Hi there! Very well written lyrics, and you can...

  Thread: Does Falling out of a fiftieth Story window always feel so good? (6 Replies, 2,674 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! Very well written lyrics, and you can almost feel the air rushing past you as you fall, you feel the emotion, and the sort of thoughts that would be going through your mind as yoour faling,...

• Hi there! You have such good writing skills!...

  Thread: To Make You Love Me... (1 Replies, 2,359 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! You have such good writing skills! Again This song is really good, very well written, with a lot of feeling behind it and completely heartfelt that willl just make the audience feel for...

• Wow awesome lyrics! I love them! Such depth and...

  Thread: If You're hurt Satisfaction can't be far away (2 Replies, 2,259 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Wow awesome lyrics! I love them! Such depth and anger in them conveyed easily in your writing! I love the title, thats great and I love the idea of children chanting that first part, it would sound...

• Hi there! Great lyrics, you leave the listener...

  Thread: I Feel Like... (3 Replies, 2,593 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! Great lyrics, you leave the listener guessing and questioning what it is that you are suggesting. Quite complex and beautifully written! I like it! :D

• Wow! First off I'd like to say I'm sorry for the...

  Thread: Screaming into silence (feedback needed) (9 Replies, 4,504 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Wow! First off I'd like to say I'm sorry for the loss of your fiancee, and also that those lyrics are amazing! Very well written such raw emotion and depth to them! They really convey the emotion...

• Lol! You're welcome! Thats good then! That style...

  Thread: Beautiful Girl (5 Replies, 2,876 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Lol! You're welcome! Thats good then! That style of writing tends to turn out better than something that is planned and really thought about, also it makes it available to a wider audience! I like...

• Hi there! i really like these lyrics! They are...

  Thread: If Ghosts Could Cry (1 Replies, 2,433 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! i really like these lyrics! They are v.well written, and I love the meaning behind them! It's a different theme, something that you don't see/hear often! Very nice :D

• Hi there! I'm with the same opinion as the rest...

  Thread: untitiled (5 Replies, 3,006 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! I'm with the same opinion as the rest that these lyrics are really good! Very well written! They hold a lot of meaning in there as well, and they are easy for people to relate to as well. :D

• Hi there! Those lyrics are really good! The only...

  Thread: Beautiful Girl (5 Replies, 2,876 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! Those lyrics are really good! The only thing I would say is that you may want the word serenade, rather than seranate. But otherwise I think that those lyrics are really good, and...

• Hey there! Different theme to be writing about...

  Thread: need review fast plz for new song (3 Replies, 2,042 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hey there! Different theme to be writing about but okies! Lol! I think that these lyrics are really good, however there are a couple of bits that I would change, even though this is a rerally small...

• I can quite honestly say that, that is your best...

  Thread: Lyrics of the wolfboy (31 Replies, 8,215 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  I can quite honestly say that, that is your best written song to date yet! Very powerful! Very nice! :D

• Hi there! Those lyrics are really good!...

  Thread: Rate my Song (3 Replies, 8,113 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! Those lyrics are really good! Especially for a first time! They are nice and simple, yet they are still clear in what they are saying! I like them they arre very well written! Very well...

• I think that to make these more into song lyrics...

  Thread: Shadow of a Wolf (3 Replies, 3,455 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  I think that to make these more into song lyrics they maybe need a chorus, but these are really well written and if you apply that style or theme the lyrics will be really good, this would make a...

• Hey there! Those lyrics are really well written...

  Thread: Forgotten (2 Replies, 2,611 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hey there! Those lyrics are really well written but I do have to agree with soosa, they do need some more verses somewhere to break the lyrics up a bit more to give more interest, but otherwise those...

• Hey there! I think that those lyrics are really...

  Thread: Night of No Remorse (3 Replies, 2,544 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hey there! I think that those lyrics are really good! Very powerfully written! I can't fault them! Expertly done! Very well done! :D

• Howdy you! :D Again all i have to say is that...

  Thread: Lyrics of the wolfboy (31 Replies, 8,215 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Howdy you! :D Again all i have to say is that your writing most definitely does improve each time! They're really well written! I enjoyed reading them, so if they were to be played I would almost...

• Hi there! Those lyrics are really good! Also your...

  Thread: The Golden Lettered Door (1 Replies, 2,532 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! Those lyrics are really good! Also your English is also very good, there are just a couple of things that need changing, 'to stand your differentness.' The word that you want at the end is...

• Hi there! Those are very good for your first...

  Thread: always && forever (1 Replies, 2,711 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Hi there! Those are very good for your first lyrics! However there are a few lines that I would suggest changing,
  "when i say "i`ll love you `till the end"
  ii know its my destiny
  to find someone...

• Ah see now, I really liked these lyrics! I think...

  Thread: A Thousand Roses (2 Replies, 3,990 Views) by SpudMunky

  
  

  Ah see now, I really liked these lyrics! I think it is very powerfully written, with very good lines in it! There is nothing within those lyrics that I would change, and I like the way that the lines...