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• It's late at night

  Thread: It's late at night (1 Replies, 5,452 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  First post for a while, be gentle!
  
  Verse 1
  It's late at night
  I can't sleep, can't get you off my mind
  And heaven knows how I've tried
  Shame and regrets
  Fill my waking consciousness
  Oh...

• Neither Jim. It's about missing my daughter who I...

  Thread: The meaning of life (2 Replies, 3,820 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Neither Jim. It's about missing my daughter who I am denied contact with. Knowing when shes old enough to make her own decisions she will come and find me.

• The meaning of life

  Thread: The meaning of life (2 Replies, 3,820 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  First post for a few years. Hope everyone is doing well. Heres some words!
  
  
  
  For you I waited
  And I'll keep on waiting
  Cus you're the apple of my eye.
  And in years to come you'll see why...

• Something I've just started to work on

  Thread: Something I've just started to work on (1 Replies, 1,144 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  You're chasing things that aren't there
  Keep on running but it's a waste of air
  You're never gonna find it, never gonna find it and I find that tragic
  
  And then you say it isn't me
  This isn't...

• Didn't go down well! After a long discussion and...

  Thread: Hey Mr Big Mouth (12 Replies, 3,573 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Didn't go down well! After a long discussion and left with two options which were No Cigar or The Last Stand we have gone with The Last Stand. Keep a look out for us ;) This is my good friends band,...

• That is not a bad shout Doug, I am seriously...

  Thread: Hey Mr Big Mouth (12 Replies, 3,573 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  That is not a bad shout Doug, I am seriously going to consider this and put it forward to the lads when we next hit the studio, snowed in here in the UK at the moment so getting a lot of time for...

• I have never heard of Chicago the band, are they...

  Thread: Other Side (New song) (9 Replies, 2,005 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  I have never heard of Chicago the band, are they American? most of my favourite bands are English, barring The Strokes and New York City Dolls. My role in the band is guitarist and singer, we are...

• Sticky: Thanks so much Amaryn, reading this back nearly...

  Thread: Poetry - General (55 Replies, 76,643 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Thanks so much Amaryn, reading this back nearly brought a tear to my eye!

• :) The band has had several names, at the minute...

  Thread: Hey Mr Big Mouth (12 Replies, 3,573 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  :) The band has had several names, at the minute we go by the name of Owl Farm! (Hunter S Thompsons lodgings) Probably will change though as we are looking at bringing another guitarist in.

• Let's hit the dancefloor

  Thread: Let's hit the dancefloor (4 Replies, 1,309 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Another new set of lyrics today...written about moody teens who think the world owes them something, I used to be one myself. Get of yer **** and do something ha!
  
  
  So you think you're eccentric...

• Hellloooooooo lol

  Thread: Dead Love (21 Replies, 6,061 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Hellloooooooo lol

• Or this one Doug?

  Thread: Other Side (New song) (9 Replies, 2,005 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Or this one Doug?

• this isn't closed Doug?

  Thread: Hey Mr Big Mouth (12 Replies, 3,573 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  this isn't closed Doug?

• Although I disagree that the planet needs saving...

  Thread: Save The Planet (13 Replies, 2,753 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Although I disagree that the planet needs saving (it's been here 5billions years, we have been here approx 200'000 years and it's still looking ok, the earth will shake us off like parasites when it...

• I have played guitar for 20 years and have always...

  Thread: your opinions (7 Replies, 2,118 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  I have played guitar for 20 years and have always kept my nails short (with biting!!) and cannot play guitar if my nails are any more than a few mm long, I don't use a plectrum either and fingerpick...

• Other Side (New song)

  Thread: Other Side (New song) (9 Replies, 2,005 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Hey guys, well the songs are flowing out of me this week, must be being stuck in my house and not the studio. HEre is my latest set of lyrics, don't worry and don't be sad, this is written about...

• Thanks, have added another verse to the song and...

  Thread: Hey Mr Big Mouth (12 Replies, 3,573 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Thanks, have added another verse to the song and changed a few words around to help it flow better whilst singing. What do you think?

• Hey Mr Big Mouth

  Thread: Hey Mr Big Mouth (12 Replies, 3,573 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  New song, quite punky and angry, will post recording of the song once the band get back in the studio, snowed in here!
  
  
  
  hey mr big mouth
  
  its all lies every time
  you use them to try and...

• Go

  Thread: Go (1 Replies, 2,126 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Anothe short one, hope you can get the rhyme scheme as its written. Enjoy :)
  
  
  
  Go
  We gotta leave
  I can feel them breathing down my neck like they're standing right in front of me
  Can feel...

• We Stand Together

  Thread: We Stand Together (1 Replies, 2,386 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Hi guys, been a while since I posted, joined a band recently and I am now writing for them, this is my first new set of lyrics. enjoy!
  
  if you ever feel like your lost
  ill find you and help you...

• well done Doug, similiar content matter to most...

  Thread: Honesty (55 Replies, 13,666 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  well done Doug, similiar content matter to most of my work, damn girls who leave you high dry and make you cry! Damn *****es! I like this bit in particular.
  
  I once believed
  That you were it
  Not...

• I'm just going to bump this one up for now, I...

  Thread: Dead Love (21 Replies, 6,061 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  I'm just going to bump this one up for now, I have a couple of new pieces to post. Was hoping Doug might see this and give me their very welcome feedback. :)

• Some good lyrics :) Try to expand it a bit...

  Thread: sands of.time (11 Replies, 2,058 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Some good lyrics :) Try to expand it a bit though. What style is this in? Good work

• hi Doug, thanks for the review, the guitar is...

  Thread: broken heart song, please review thanks :( (3 Replies, 2,143 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  hi Doug, thanks for the review, the guitar is similar to where is my mind by the pixies. I will get a recording of it and post soon!

• Edited the lyrics a little, what do you think?

  Thread: Danced until midnight (3 Replies, 1,595 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Edited the lyrics a little, what do you think?

• Danced until midnight

  Thread: Danced until midnight (3 Replies, 1,595 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  i first saw her sat in the corner
  so i started walking toward her
  but my mouth went dry and my brain went numb
  and the words they just wouldnt come
  
  so i looked at her and she looked back at me...

• broken heart song, please review thanks :(

  Thread: broken heart song, please review thanks :( (3 Replies, 2,143 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  someone must be to blame
  but i can only lay
  this at my door
  
  another time another place
  and it could be so differrent
  but you know im sure
  
  that its not you its me
  and i will always be

• Diamond rings

  Thread: Diamond rings (0 Replies, 1,224 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Song about a girl (for a change!) who thinks money is more important than a good soul or love
  
  
  Just for a second i thought I caught your eye
  but no surprise it was just a passer by
  yeah he good...

• quick song, no name, please review thanks

  Thread: quick song, no name, please review thanks (1 Replies, 1,165 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  I believe
  that you and me
  were meant to be
  but our love got drowned at sea
  
  on the ocean floor
  lost forever more
  now i worry for
  what will become of you and me

• work in progress, what do you recko?

  Thread: work in progress, what do you recko? (0 Replies, 1,461 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  it took a long time to get here
  such a long way from home
  these streets seem uninviting
  i dont know if i belong
  
  i feel like a statue
  in a fast moving town
  everybodys getting older
  but im...

• Wrote Chorus, need help with verses and a bridge

  Thread: Wrote Chorus, need help with verses and a bridge (0 Replies, 1,417 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  I have wrote a chorus over F, G, Am, F, G Am Am with the words
  
  I don't wanna be the fall guy
  I wanna be walking tall and I
  Don't wanna take the blame any more
  
  Stuck for ideas for verses...

• I like these lyrics a lot. Life does get hard...

  Thread: In Ruins (3 Replies, 1,386 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  I like these lyrics a lot. Life does get hard sometimes and these words help express those times. Well done.
  
  Leave a comment on mine if you have time brother...

• i'm not really into rap myself but even I can...

  Thread: first attempt, feedback please? (2 Replies, 1,451 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  i'm not really into rap myself but even I can read the lyrics and they do roll of the tongue easily. I'm not keen on the content but that's due to my opposite taste in music I assume but you have...

• Lottery (Short song) Please review!!

  Thread: Lottery (Short song) Please review!! (2 Replies, 1,579 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  I can't believe it
  hasn't happened for me
  I get no luck at all
  but I still play the lottery
  
  And one of these days
  we'll be on that plane
  with money no worry
  just heading for better days

• Fantastic words, and if you check my post history...

  Thread: Not Asking (9 Replies, 2,040 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Fantastic words, and if you check my post history I very rarely leave a comment without any sort of advice on improvements but this really needs no improvement. Great work.

• A nice song One thing I would change is this...

  Thread: A song for my girlfriend (2 Replies, 7,597 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  A nice song
  
  One thing I would change is this line I would swim across frozen water to 'I would swim across white waters' you can't swim across frozen water its ice! Just puts an awkward image in...

• Thank you very much!

  Thread: Dead Love (21 Replies, 6,061 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Thank you very much!

• Surely you can't just come here expecting a...

  Thread: Tribute to Our Nightmares (3 Replies, 2,118 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Surely you can't just come here expecting a review without even looking at anyone else's work first. Bad vibes and I doubt anyone will be prepared to review whilst you just ignore everyone else's...

• not being funny but who is interested in a song...

  Thread: day of the locust (2 Replies, 1,834 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  not being funny but who is interested in a song about insects!! The words flow and bore me at the same time, sorry!

• Wow What world do you live in!! Mental!!

  Thread: rat power (2 Replies, 1,851 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Wow What world do you live in!! Mental!!

• Really emotive lyrical work there, I guess...

  Thread: my 2nd lyrics- the day you were gone (7 Replies, 2,163 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Really emotive lyrical work there, I guess writing this has helped you in your grief somewhat. I love what music can do!!

• Hi, Im not really into R&B all that much but I...

  Thread: I Wanna Be Your Man (slow R&B) (2 Replies, 4,206 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Hi, Im not really into R&B all that much but I would be interested to hear some lyrics like these simple and about love rather than killin me *****s an that!

• Passionate lyrics.....I can see how this could...

  Thread: Best Friend (5 Replies, 1,761 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Passionate lyrics.....I can see how this could fit into a melody despite the above users comments, i could name loads of songs with long lines but that would take the focus off your work which is...

• She Denies

  Thread: She Denies (1 Replies, 1,285 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  This is a song born out of frustration at my daughters mother for not letting me see my girl. Hope you like it, wish I didn't have to write it.
  
  
  
  Verse 1
  She wont let me near you
  She wont let...

• Wow forgot about this one!

  Thread: Dead Love (21 Replies, 6,061 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Wow forgot about this one!

• Just changed a couple of things, what do you...

  Thread: No name yet, help me out? (3 Replies, 2,058 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Just changed a couple of things, what do you think ?

• Some cracking use of the English language in...

  Thread: Without Your Love (3 Replies, 1,464 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Some cracking use of the English language in there.
  
  The only thing I would change is
  
  Wish that I could fly,
  Somewhere high above,
  Cos I just cannot live,
  Without your love

• Karma is a female dog

  Thread: Karma is a female dog (1 Replies, 1,307 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  Karma's a *****
  
  V1
  Good things happen to good people
  I just happen to believe in
  Karma and Fate
  If you make the mistake you will pay
  You will...

• cool work point, glad to see you're still working...

  Thread: Car Crash (3 Replies, 1,962 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  cool work point, glad to see you're still working hard at lyrics.. I've been away for a while been very busy but have found time for some new songs which I will post soon.

• I like this, and as you will get to know on here...

  Thread: Victory (11 Replies, 2,253 Views) by Experimentalist

  
  

  I like this, and as you will get to know on here I am not famous for liking much so a big well done.