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• WIP, no title yet

  Thread: WIP, no title yet (0 Replies, 20,617 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  This is just a bridge I came up with, probably to be used in a pop song, aka, this will be the only part of the song that is rapped.
  
  Girl, you’re gonna miss my blessed kiss,
  ‘Cuz you ain’t gonna...

• https://soundcloud.com/corinne-prudente/i-will-be-...

  Thread: I Will Be Whole (1 Replies, 2,675 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  https://soundcloud.com/corinne-prudente/i-will-be-whole

• I Will Be Whole

  Thread: I Will Be Whole (1 Replies, 2,675 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  It's twelve A.M. and we're fighting again
  It's like a blow to my chest, and I'm caving in,
  Making myself smaller to please you again
  You say I'm too much
  
  Ripping off little bits of myself,...

• Thanks Jim!

  Thread: Love Letter (7 Replies, 2,155 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  Thanks Jim!

• Wow thanks that means a lot! I used to try to...

  Thread: Love Letter (7 Replies, 2,155 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  Wow thanks that means a lot! I used to try to write music and the lyrics were always really wishy-washy and cliché and I didn't feel very confident about it. I just started to write again and I've...

• Thank you I'm glad you think it works well :)

  Thread: Own Worst Enemy (4 Replies, 2,647 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  Thank you I'm glad you think it works well :)

• And as for the genre of the song, I was actually...

  Thread: Love Letter (7 Replies, 2,155 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  And as for the genre of the song, I was actually going for pop with a little bit of a rock vibe, but I think it would also translate well to something more acoustic.

• Nono! I actually really appreciate the critique!...

  Thread: Love Letter (7 Replies, 2,155 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  Nono! I actually really appreciate the critique! Love the change to the 4th line, thank you for that.
  
  I'll keep the other two changes in mind. The second line of the second verse was intended...

• Love Letter

  Thread: Love Letter (7 Replies, 2,155 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  Last time I felt this I was in the same spot
  Staring at the books on the floor
  Holding off on things I knew I had to do
  Though I would rather make my way out the door
  Couldn’t swallow couldn’t...

• I like your lyrics, especially the last line. I...

  Thread: " Metaphors don't cloud the truth" (1 Replies, 2,552 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  I like your lyrics, especially the last line. I don't understand why it's called "Metaphors Don't Cloud the Truth" though. Why not call it "The One I Love" or "Stuck Inside Dreams" since those are...

• Thanks Kerri I'm glad you think so :)

  Thread: Own Worst Enemy (4 Replies, 2,647 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  Thanks Kerri I'm glad you think so :)

• Sticky: Poll: Contests could be really cool. Maybe writing...

  Thread: Question to all authors posting here (9 Replies, 35,939 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  Contests could be really cool. Maybe writing lyrics about certain topics? It would almost be like a prompt ad it could really get creative juices flowing.

• username change? administrators, please help!

  Thread: username change? administrators, please help! (1 Replies, 10,291 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  I signed up for an account by connecting it to my facebook, and I didn't realize that my full name would be stuck as my username. I really don't want people to be able to search for me so easily. ...

• I like how the lyrics play off of the cliché...

  Thread: I Looked Twice! (2 Replies, 1,482 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  I like how the lyrics play off of the cliché "love at first sight" instead of depending on it. Nice little twist to freshen up an old concept.

• I like the turnaround at the end.

  Thread: Prison Cell (12/29/14) (8 Replies, 3,760 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  I like the turnaround at the end.

• Own Worst Enemy

  Thread: Own Worst Enemy (4 Replies, 2,647 Views) by ShadowPaintedRose

  
  

  I wrote a song about how my anxiety limits me and how I can never get rid of it no matter how hard I try. Hope you like it.
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  My first thought when I hear her: I should learn how to sew
  It...