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• 76 Years

  Thread: 76 Years (1 Replies, 1,237 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  It's two thirty
  I'm walkin' home
  Two hours and a half too soon
  Cause youre in tears
  Youve been contemplating this moment
  for 76 years
  
  I know it's not easy
  But you've got to believe me

• I am not. But, I'll look into. If he did copy my...

  Thread: And They F*cked (7 Replies, 3,672 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  I am not. But, I'll look into. If he did copy my poem I will prosecute him with the full extent of the law : )

• I think that a gummy bear eating the knife adds...

  Thread: Simple Abc's Please Comment!!!!!!!! (7 Replies, 3,277 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  I think that a gummy bear eating the knife adds to the irony of it all; typically gummy bears are the ones being eaten, but, in this situation, they're eating everything, including the knife!
  
  I...

• It's too dressed up with large words. It's...

  Thread: SAD POEM: Try, Fail, and Pretend You Don't Feel Their Disappointment (5 Replies, 4,203 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  It's too dressed up with large words. It's alright to have them here and there as an added sparkle. However, when they're all over the place it's like a woman with too much makeup.

• It's real. Never let anyone tell you otherwise.

  Thread: Confused (2 Replies, 2,595 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  It's real. Never let anyone tell you otherwise.

• I figured that I'd write something that every...

  Thread: And They F*cked (7 Replies, 3,672 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  I figured that I'd write something that every person in the world could unwillingly relate to in some way or form. Though, I don't consider it to be poetic as far as rhyming goes.
  
  Thank you for...

• No no no no

  Thread: And They F*cked (7 Replies, 3,672 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  Humans aren't the cleanliest of animals, and, if you felt those emotions, I accomplished what I set-out to do :)
  
  Thanks for the feedback!

• And They F*cked

  Thread: And They F*cked (7 Replies, 3,672 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  Any comments/suggestions are greatly appreciated. I really hope this doesn't get removed:
  
  Version 1:
  [And They F*cked:
  
  
  Little Timmy had a crush
  A crush that made his stomach turn to mush
  ...

• I like it:) I'v never been the largest of fans of...

  Thread: The Climb-Miley Cyrus [rewritten] (3 Replies, 2,460 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  I like it:) I'v never been the largest of fans of Miley. But, the lyrics, when rewritten with umph—as you did—are wicked!

• La La La La La ,La La La La, La La La La, La La...

  Thread: Most beautiful lyrics of all! (126 Replies, 157,082 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  La La La La La ,La La La La, La La La La, La La La La, La La La La, La La La La, La La La La,
  
  Eat, sleep,
  And breathe it you're full of the stuff
  Go bag it, tie it up tight
  Wheat,meat, dairy...

• Imogen Heap is really fantastic, among her best...

  Thread: Favorite Lyricists (31 Replies, 15,361 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  Imogen Heap is really fantastic, among her best lyrics—and songs—are: Aha!, Hide and Seek, Goodnight and Go, and Canvas.
  
  Regina Spektor takes second place(in my odd opinion), simply because her...

• Hello

  Thread: Hello (1 Replies, 1,328 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  I enjoy writing poetry and songs. It's nice to meet anyone or anything who's reading this.
  
  All the best,
  Me

• Panda Panda

  Thread: Panda Panda (1 Replies, 2,656 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  Rawr, Lawr
  
  
  I wrestled a Panda Bear,
  all cuddly and cute.
  Its fur was black and its fur was white,
  and some days, they switched,
  with ferocious might.
  I held a candle to its eyes to see...

• I've an odd relationship with Rap music: I think...

  Thread: Come in and review please (3 Replies, 836 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  I've an odd relationship with Rap music: I think its the most beautiful to read, but, I just can't find it pleasant to listen to. That said, I love your lyircs.

• Clown's Lull

  Thread: Clown's Lull (0 Replies, 1,074 Views) by LaylaFelix

  
  

  So, I'm new to this; hopefully I'm not too awful, hopefully I'm not too good. Any feedback would be much appreciated!
  Thank you, Alex
  
  
  
  
  Clown's Lull
  
  Hold my hand, hold it tight
  Let’s rob...