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• I think "the slightest nudge" or "the slightest...

  Thread: Senses (1/20/14) (5 Replies, 1,817 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  I think "the slightest nudge" or "the slightest of nudges" would flow better than "even just a nudge".
  
  And maybe change "still lingers here" to "continues to adhere". But I'm just being picky....

• Doug: Since all my lyrics are stored in text...

  Thread: Symptoms (4 Replies, 1,474 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Doug: Since all my lyrics are stored in text files, all I have to do is copy and paste them.
  Kerri: Hmm, so I can check "be someone's favorite lyricist" off my bucket list.
  BackInBlack: That's not...

• "And I'm tired of clipping my wings Cause I want...

  Thread: 'Let Go of Me' (7 Replies, 1,467 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  "And I'm tired of clipping my wings
  Cause I want to fly, you see
  It's always been man's oldest dream"
  
  I sense that you'd make a good writing partner.

• The two best things about this song: 1) It flows...

  Thread: My Little Girl (7 Replies, 2,431 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  The two best things about this song:
  1) It flows pretty well.
  2) The story pulls you in.

• Symptoms

  Thread: Symptoms (4 Replies, 1,474 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  I figured I'd post something darker this time.
  
  "Tear me apart
  Pierce straight to my heart
  I'm fine with being
  Just another casualty
  
  But make it brief
  I want the most relief
  I'll have it...

• Awesome. Also, I just posted the updated version.

  Thread: May You Forever Run (10 Replies, 1,511 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Awesome. Also, I just posted the updated version.

• Fair enough! That's why I don't understand why...

  Thread: A Foolish Need (4 Replies, 852 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Fair enough! That's why I don't understand why Chad Kroeger gets so much hate. You may not like his voice, but he's responsible for writing a lot of hit songs. Tim McGraw's "Southern Voice" being a...

• Well, I see myself as more of a songwriter than a...

  Thread: A Foolish Need (4 Replies, 852 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Well, I see myself as more of a songwriter than a performer, so I'd be happy just to sell one of my songs. As it is, I have a whole library to fall back on, but I'm always going back and updating my...

• I tend to agree. It's a shame that we settle for...

  Thread: Light & Dark (Duality) (3 Replies, 1,155 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  I tend to agree. It's a shame that we settle for just getting by.

• A Foolish Need

  Thread: A Foolish Need (4 Replies, 852 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Pretty standard song with my own twist.
  
  Normality is overrated, he said
  It's easier to walk around jaded
  Than pick himself up again
  
  Finalize the withdrawal he tried
  When every other option...

• Never Too Late was the first song I learned,...

  Thread: Leap of Faith (1/4/14) (10 Replies, 2,053 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Never Too Late was the first song I learned, actually. Most of my songs were written for that type of music. Cold has a few songs in particular that I feel stand well above the rest. Feel It In Your...

• I especially like Aaron Lewis' cover of What...

  Thread: Leap of Faith (1/4/14) (10 Replies, 2,053 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  I especially like Aaron Lewis' cover of What Hurts The Most. Do you listen to the band Cold? Learning to play the guitar is easy if you start out with Three Days Grace, Green Day, etc. Most of their...

• Yeah, I'm glad I could help. If you come up with...

  Thread: Live Today (8 Replies, 1,594 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Yeah, I'm glad I could help. If you come up with a good riff to go along with it, I'd like to hear it.

• I'm getting an Aaron Lewis (Staind) vibe. If you...

  Thread: Leap of Faith (1/4/14) (10 Replies, 2,053 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  I'm getting an Aaron Lewis (Staind) vibe. If you haven't already come up with a melody, I'd suggest doing so because this song could go places.

• Light & Dark (Duality)

  Thread: Light & Dark (Duality) (3 Replies, 1,155 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  There isn't much to say about this one.
  
  "Let's dream of a better world
  Where a glass house isn't so fragile
  And the stars may shine
  Beyond the curtain of the night
  
  And when lightning strikes...

• Melodies are what I'm worst at, unfortunately.

  Thread: May You Forever Run (10 Replies, 1,511 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Melodies are what I'm worst at, unfortunately.

• Ironically, I have a song with the same title. I...

  Thread: Live Today (8 Replies, 1,594 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Ironically, I have a song with the same title. I think they both express the need of living for today upside worrying about the past or being anxious about the future, but you took a slightly...

• Hmm, I think you're right. Perhaps the chorus...

  Thread: May You Forever Run (10 Replies, 1,511 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Hmm, I think you're right. Perhaps the chorus would be better as this:
  
  "May you forever run until you find happiness
  And the confidence to fulfill your dreams
  May you forever run until you hold...

• May You Forever Run

  Thread: May You Forever Run (10 Replies, 1,511 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  Unfortunately, I don't really have a melody or any chords prepared for this song. I wrote the chorus while listening to Gavin Rossdale a while back and just went with it. Feel free to...

• I'm assuming you're fine with the lyrics being a...

  Thread: Need help making a line less cheesy! (3 Replies, 1,017 Views) by Justin Sylver

  
  

  I'm assuming you're fine with the lyrics being a little heavy given the topic.
  
  Values as worthless as the thoughts put into them
  Let what's rotten remain rotten
  Slowly eating away at the chances...