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• First 16 bars in 10 years. No regular post.

  Thread: First 16 bars in 10 years. No regular post. (0 Replies, 17,771 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  I live in a cold dead universe so what you rehearse dont concern me
  I firstly form personal views then argue conversely
  Tryina work out these, verbally nonsensical slurrings
  into something...

• **** Twitter.

  Thread: **** Twitter. (0 Replies, 1,286 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  I think too much, you speak too much.
  Fat people sweat cos they eat too much.
  Whenever they eat they Tweet, so they Tweet too much.
  I don't give a f*ck what you eat for lunch.
  
  These Noobs get...

• **** Twitter.

  Thread: **** Twitter. (0 Replies, 1,405 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

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• Diagnosis

  Thread: Diagnosis (0 Replies, 1,497 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Since about two years ago I noticed a change.
  The way my mind would twist and turn in devious ways.
  It keeps me awake, for hours and days.
  Clues of mental meltdown in the sh*t that I say.
  
  I...

• When I wrote this particular rap I was inspired...

  Thread: I hate you! (3 Replies, 3,240 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  When I wrote this particular rap I was inspired just by the way I felt at that moment. I was angry and annoyed.
  If I had to pick an artist to take inspiration from; I'd say Eminem. Or any artist...

• I hate you!

  Thread: I hate you! (3 Replies, 3,240 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  You don't have to guess who's back, I never left!
  I always been whispering lyrics under my breath,
  And I always had some sh*t I need to get off my chest.
  That's why I spit until my mouth is dry...

• HAHA, Thanks. My biggest fan So what you think...

  Thread: You're dEad to me. (6 Replies, 2,411 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  HAHA,
  Thanks.
  My biggest fan
  So what you think of the rap?

• It's Jeffs And my first name is Paul. But...

  Thread: You're dEad to me. (6 Replies, 2,411 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  It's Jeffs
  And my first name is Paul.
  But thanks.. I didn't realise so many people on here would remember me.

• You're dEad to me.

  Thread: You're dEad to me. (6 Replies, 2,411 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  You took a plain piece of paper, took a slate that was clean.
  You took the f*cking piss and you f*cked with his dreams.
  And when you ran from the tears and you ran from the screams.
  You bred a...

• Yo Lil Austy I can't believe you still rap here.

  Thread: LILAustys rap insane (10 Replies, 2,725 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Yo Lil Austy I can't believe you still rap here.

• I'm back! Here's a rap concept I'm going to develop.

  Thread: I'm back! Here's a rap concept I'm going to develop. (4 Replies, 1,489 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  I wish it was possible for me to do,
  The impossible thing and just talk to you.
  Cos there's a couple things that I need to say.
  But you'll never read this anyway.
  
  I'm like, Honest when I say...

• Not your best Tyler lol ;)

  Thread: Piss me off (38 Replies, 4,668 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Not your best Tyler lol
  ;)

• No one noticed you left The only reason to panic...

  Thread: my rap (242 Replies, 21,245 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  No one noticed you left
  The only reason to panic is that your rhymes are so appalling people will kill themselves.
  The only thing that needs to blow up is your bars, you're about 500 syllables...

• Holy sh*t you retard, oh god, stop it please. I...

  Thread: Piss me off (38 Replies, 4,668 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Holy sh*t you retard, oh god, stop it please.
  I told you how to rap but dude I never said copy me.
  You cut and paste the toast I posted to show you how to hate me.
  You find me on the front page, I...

• Are you serious? I'm giving constructive...

  Thread: Thank you jeffs....BUT..... (18 Replies, 2,870 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Are you serious?
  I'm giving constructive criticism, you're the idiot that is incapable of using constructive criticism to your advantage.
  I never said I was "all that"
  
  Short comings? I don't see...

• Seriously, learn to put your lyrics into bars....

  Thread: Thank you jeffs....BUT..... (18 Replies, 2,870 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Seriously, learn to put your lyrics into bars.
  Do you understand the concept of a beat and flow?

• Firstly, I have 3 A*s in Biology, Chemistry and...

  Thread: my rap (242 Replies, 21,245 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Firstly, I have 3 A*s in Biology, Chemistry and Physics A levels, so don't question my success or intelligence.
  Secondly, no one is hating on anyone, there are threads by some of us battle rappers...

• I'm not gonna comment on the fact that you're...

  Thread: my first rap.... please read (1 Replies, 1,553 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  I'm not gonna comment on the fact that you're arguing on the internet but I will offer you an opinion on the rap you posted at the beginning of this thread.
  
  I'm not hating so just see this as...

• Thats cool brother ;)

  Thread: Lets do a rap battle. Mods too! (50 Replies, 5,773 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Thats cool brother ;)

• I have a couple messages here for you First one...

  Thread: my rap (242 Replies, 21,245 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  I have a couple messages here for you
  First one says... "shut the **** up"
  Second one says.. "You cant rap for **** and so your opinion means nothing
  
  And then I'd just like to add that lyricism...

• You talking about me? I don't rap in bars?

  Thread: Lets do a rap battle. Mods too! (50 Replies, 5,773 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  You talking about me?
  I don't rap in bars?

• Do you actually think you're good at rapping?...

  Thread: New tread...new battle... (12 Replies, 2,979 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Do you actually think you're good at rapping?
  I'm asking that as a serious question.

• Guess that makes me the king?

  Thread: my rap (242 Replies, 21,245 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Guess that makes me the king?

• If you're gonna come up in my interwebs make a...

  Thread: Lets do a rap battle. Mods too! (50 Replies, 5,773 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  If you're gonna come up in my interwebs make a post worth reading.
  Although you achieved one thing and left me screaming
  Cos laughter comes after you craft lyrical disasters
  Carrier bags and hair...

• You shouldn't talk **** as it's bad for your...

  Thread: New tread...new battle... (12 Replies, 2,979 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  You shouldn't talk **** as it's bad for your health
  Your rhymes are on lone cos they're by themself
  Your rhymes aren't so tight, unlike your girlfriends vagina.
  Because you don't know how to use...

• You don't need to start a new rap battle thread,...

  Thread: Lets start a freestyle rap battle. (103 Replies, 287,028 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  You don't need to start a new rap battle thread, one already exists.
  You can go get killed there instead.
  
  (that was not supposed to rhyme.)

• you're sh*t Give up Molotova will kill you

  Thread: Lets do a rap battle. Mods too! (50 Replies, 5,773 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  you're sh*t
  Give up
  Molotova will kill you

• You better not be talking about me because I will...

  Thread: Lets do a rap battle. Mods too! (50 Replies, 5,773 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  You better not be talking about me because I will literally rap you into a coma

• you are so sh*t

  Thread: my rap (242 Replies, 21,245 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  you
  are
  so
  sh*t

• I find it hard to rap at you when I know that you...

  Thread: Lets do a rap battle. Mods too! (50 Replies, 5,773 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  I find it hard to rap at you when I know that you respect me.
  You have my poster on your wall. Titled 'sexy'.
  I know you worship and remember every word that I say.
  Recite them all day, you even...

• Only thing I snap on the beat is my fingers....

  Thread: Lets do a rap battle. Mods too! (50 Replies, 5,773 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Only thing I snap on the beat is my fingers.
  Beat box on the street it's sweet the heat lingers.
  Understanding of random beats and clicks is sick. Extraordinary.
  You miss the days you shaved your...

• God dammit it's Jeffs with an S First name...

  Thread: my rap (242 Replies, 21,245 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  God dammit
  it's Jeffs
  with an S
  First name Paul
  Second name Jeffs

• Thing is, you say that you think I'm good but...

  Thread: Lets do a rap battle. Mods too! (50 Replies, 5,773 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Thing is, you say that you think I'm good but then when you rap all you talk about is how **** I am, and that you're better than me.
  I can't respect lines like that. Stop telling me how **** I am,...

• Listen to 'Chief Rocka' by 'Lords of the...

  Thread: my rap (242 Replies, 21,245 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Listen to 'Chief Rocka' by 'Lords of the Underground
  and 'True Fu Schnick' by 'The Fu Schnickens'

• I'll kick it off, kick up a storm. A battle is...

  Thread: Lets do a rap battle. Mods too! (50 Replies, 5,773 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  I'll kick it off, kick up a storm. A battle is born.
  From a destructive and corrupted brain that's war torn.
  Your rhymes are slime, mine control time.
  Twist the universe, reverse and rehearse my...

• Tyler you come a long way, I can tell you're...

  Thread: my rap (242 Replies, 21,245 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Tyler you come a long way, I can tell you're using the advice I gave you.
  Saber maybe you should take a leaf outta Tyler's book, you have a lot of room for improvement.
  Come on Tyler, I'm not that...

• You need a tunnel as a funnel to amplify your...

  Thread: my rap (242 Replies, 21,245 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  You need a tunnel as a funnel to amplify your words.
  I'm a screaming riot you're the quietest thing I never heard.
  I'll never lay eyes on you, you're right cos you're so small.
  An invisible...

• My turn;) Your rhymes will never make you...

  Thread: my rap (242 Replies, 21,245 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  My turn;)
  
  Your rhymes will never make you rich, they don't make cents. ;)
  I got infinite minutes to weave words into many pence.
  I'm a telephonic sonic, lyrical vomit.
  Invisible to cynical...

• I don't write plan versions. I think about what...

  Thread: Two freestyle raps. (8 Replies, 194,607 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  I don't write plan versions.
  I think about what I want to say, and then I say it in a stylish and meaningful way
  
  Every now and then I will write a piece that I rap to myself multiple times and...

• I seriously doubt this is freestyle. And the...

  Thread: another unfinished rap. (21 Replies, 12,502 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  I seriously doubt this is freestyle.
  And the last line isn't good lol

• Okay, so to fix flow, you need to be aware of the...

  Thread: Two freestyle raps. (8 Replies, 194,607 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Okay, so to fix flow, you need to be aware of the fact that you only have 4 beats to a bar and you have a line there
  "You keep this sh** up ima hurt you so bad, the hospital spit you out sayin there...

• It's a play on words. I know you f*ck girls...

  Thread: How to kill a snake. (first verse) (4 Replies, 1,923 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  It's a play on words.
  I know you f*ck girls often but you're heartless.
  
  It's a play because of the word beat means both to f*ck and for your heart to beat.
  see?

• Thanks for the lecture.. I'll write that down. ...

  Thread: Two freestyle raps. (8 Replies, 194,607 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Thanks for the lecture.. I'll write that down.
  
  It's simple to take opinions on what to do to improve it in my opinion.
  I'm not saying that I could tell you how to make this good or that my...

• I don't think anything of myself I just don't...

  Thread: another unfinished rap. (21 Replies, 12,502 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  I don't think anything of myself
  I just don't think highly of weak rhymes.

• You really have no idea about rap do you.

  Thread: another unfinished rap. (21 Replies, 12,502 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  You really have no idea about rap do you.

• This is never going to fit to any beat that obeys...

  Thread: Two freestyle raps. (8 Replies, 194,607 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  This is never going to fit to any beat that obeys the laws of physics.
  Why have you used the word n*gga so much?
  Just because it's rap doesn't mean you have to swear and all that.
  
  Rhyme scheme...

• didn't read it all lost interest after the first...

  Thread: Let Me Burn - Please Take a Look (1 Replies, 1,108 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  didn't read it all
  lost interest after the first line

• How to kill a snake. (first verse)

  Thread: How to kill a snake. (first verse) (4 Replies, 1,923 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Just to clear up. Where I'm from, a snake is a sly person who will betray you and pretend he's your friend. Go behind your back and stab you.
  Also, to 'beat' is a slang term which means to f*ck a...

• 'TheBest' is not the best but better than...

  Thread: another unfinished rap. (21 Replies, 12,502 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  'TheBest' is not the best but better than 'RapperInTheMakin'
  
  Of course my girl Molotova showing both you dudes up.
  She knows about the rap battle sh*t. ;)

• Simple rhyme scheme. No interesting theme or...

  Thread: rap written in 5 min (2 Replies, 2,564 Views) by 020Jeffs

  
  

  Simple rhyme scheme.
  No interesting theme or any point to relate to.
  No message, no feeling, no flow.
  Nothing new, nothing clever.