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well, I'm sorry to have to be the one to tell...
Thread: What do you think about my lyrics (3 Replies, 19,781 Views) by jony bek
well, I'm sorry to have to be the one to tell you, 'but' it just reads like a load of mubo jumbo nothing makes sence, there's not even a story to follow here, go back to the drawing board...
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answer is yes
Thread: Heart Broken (22 Replies, 5,207 Views) by jony bek
try the Lyrics review "your touch is Electric"
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heart broken
Thread: Heart Broken (22 Replies, 5,207 Views) by jony bek
NICE TO HEAR I CAN REACH SOMEBODIES HEART! thanks for the mini review but its Steve0 song?
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heart broken
Thread: Heart Broken (22 Replies, 5,207 Views) by jony bek
"SOME"
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Too Late
Thread: Too Late!! (10 Replies, 3,262 Views) by jony bek
Too Late THE HOOK
V1
All I wanted was my happiness
But you always let me down
Now I’ll carry on without you
Because I’m leaving town
V2
Gonna start another life -
Hi again
just read your mail genisha, yes I'm a...
Thread: Its Over (4 Replies, 1,324 Views) by jony bek
Hi again
just read your mail genisha, yes I'm a boy and I write for female artists as well as male.
the bla bla bla, bit is where you must carry on the song yourself in the same way I've shown... -
the devils crime
Thread: the devils crime..looking for some critiquing (7 Replies, 1,629 Views) by jony bek
look cody
you would benefit greatly from doing a little research on how to construct a song/lyric before you write anything else, to put it mildly its so hard to orate you'd never be able to sing... -
Your Touch is Electric
Thread: Your Touch is Electric (2 Replies, 2,311 Views) by jony bek
The Quick Brown Fox
The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog.
dog. The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy
dog. The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy
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Dream
Thread: Dream (please comment!) (1 Replies, 992 Views) by jony bek
Hi Adam
Your another one who needs to research song structures if you intend to do well in the music industry with your songs, if you write for yourself it doesn’t matter so much but this being... -
It's Over
Thread: Its Over (4 Replies, 1,324 Views) by jony bek
Hi Genisha
Just been reading your song (ITS OVER) you have labeled your hook at the end BUT the song title is nearly always the HOOK and you repeat it quite often because that’s the memorable part... -
heart broken
Thread: Heart Broken (22 Replies, 5,207 Views) by jony bek
Ok steve0
if you really want to learn the art of songwriting, this is a good place to start, it's where I began.
you'll find that writing songs is much the same as writing poetry only you add a... -
heart broken
Thread: Heart Broken (22 Replies, 5,207 Views) by jony bek
just to elieviate any further confusion.
Try something like this. A new title
(Once Again My Heart Was Broke)
V1
The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog.
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well adam
its not quite apparent to know what...
Thread: All Gone (4 Replies, 1,114 Views) by jony bek
well adam
its not quite apparent to know what gendre your writing for, it seems to me like 'RAP' and I'm not up on rap at all, because I dont think it would fit anywhere else, its quite hard to...