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• awesme lets do it..im going on emergecey leave...

  Thread: Girls, Guitars, and Gasoline (17 Replies, 9,272 Views) by coral834

  
  

  awesme lets do it..im going on emergecey leave today but will be back on wed...we talk then and see ewhat we can come up with..do me a favor im looking for feedback on a song i posted on reverd...

• You Me and The Countery Radio

  Thread: You Me and The Countery Radio (0 Replies, 823 Views) by coral834

  
  

  SO Excited to finally share this song please let me know what you think
  
  IF you like what you read feel free to check it out on reverb nation
  
  http://www.reverbnation.com/jeffcoral
  
  1:
  You...

• Punk Rock Girl MP3 and lyrics

  Thread: Punk Rock Girl MP3 and lyrics (1 Replies, 1,028 Views) by coral834

  
  

  i posted the lyrics a few weeks ago and got a good response, i put the mp3 up on reverb nation...let me know what you think
  
  http://www.reverbnation.com/jeffcoral
  
  
  1: I see you streaks of red...

• Do you play an instrument I'd love to hear one...

  Thread: Strangers (5 Replies, 1,600 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Do you play an instrument I'd love to hear one of your songs how you intended it to sound? If u don't u should

• As always your songs are very good!!!everyone...

  Thread: Nowhere to Run, Nowhere to Hide (1/27/14) (5 Replies, 1,960 Views) by coral834

  
  

  As always your songs are very good!!!everyone I've read is great..leave the chorus as is I think it adds a little depth/touch of what happens next...I like it I really do

• Just listened to it on reverb nation..it's...

  Thread: Girls, Guitars, and Gasoline (17 Replies, 9,272 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Just listened to it on reverb nation..it's awesome..what is you recording set up if u don't mind me asking

• Bro I love this..reminds of a punk gone aucostic...

  Thread: Girls, Guitars, and Gasoline (17 Replies, 9,272 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Bro I love this..reminds of a punk gone aucostic song I just wrote!!! totally get a social d on the aucostic vibe, and
  I agree great job telling the story...I need help with a couple of songs I...

• Verse help please

  Thread: Verse help please (0 Replies, 688 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Hey y'all sorry I haven't posted in about week I was in the field and started school!! I'm gonna post a chorus I've written but can't even begging to think about how to start the verses and bridge....

• Right on. Definitely agree on the ska feel..I...

  Thread: Sick of you (5 Replies, 1,421 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Right on. Definitely agree on the ska feel..I immediately thought about taking back Sunday or Rufio wjen I read this..nice song

• Thanks Doug!! I really like this song too!!

  Thread: Punk Rock Girl (4 Replies, 1,253 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Thanks Doug!! I really like this song too!!

• Mel..i know exactly what you mean when u said...

  Thread: I thought you were my fairytale (10 Replies, 2,495 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Mel..i know exactly what you mean when u said people could or do think its teenish...i can see how they could make that comparison..I really do like it though..I would do like a rockish/pop song with...

• Punk Rock Girl

  Thread: Punk Rock Girl (4 Replies, 1,253 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Have an MP3 of this song to attach but it wont upload fo rsoem reason???
  
  
  (Think story of my life by Social D) but aucostic
  V1: I see you, streaks of red running in your hair
  Chasing yellow...

• Nice song very heartfelt and deep. .I really...

  Thread: Lonesome Butterfly (6 Replies, 1,639 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Nice song very heartfelt and deep. .I really like thedo it all in one place ... las Vegas line....

• I really like this...when I read it. I get a...

  Thread: Better Days (8 Replies, 2,710 Views) by coral834

  
  

  I really like this...when I read it. I get a Justin Timberlake cry me a river feel in the verse then a hard crunchy but upbeat chorus.!! I may be all wrong in how it sounds...but absolutely love the...

• Very well written song...wish I one how to mend a...

  Thread: so beautifully sad (5 Replies, 1,385 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Very well written song...wish I one how to mend a broken heart!!. Really really dig the...so beautifully dad inside line. I can def relate to this song..keep writing brother.
  
  Jeff

• Wont Fade Away (That Kind of Love) Lyric review

  Thread: Wont Fade Away (That Kind of Love) Lyric review (0 Replies, 918 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Wont Fade Away ©
  Jeff Coral 2013
  Key F: Capo On 2 V/C/V/C/B/C
  Bluesy/Southern Rock with a Funky sounding bridge..Sorry no recording of it just yet(its coming)
  
  1:
  Well I’m headed home to...

• Sounds like a terrible place to be..and for...

  Thread: Nuthouse Called Nashville (1 Replies, 1,911 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Sounds like a terrible place to be..and for whatever reason I want to go there in the worst way....we'll maybe not the worst. I'd take the Texas music scene over Nashville...nice song, get a real...

• Kerri this the second song of your that I've read...

  Thread: One Way Ticket (Feb. 2013) (3 Replies, 1,430 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Kerri this the second song of your that I've read and they have both been awesome. Again, I can hear the rhythm and music in my head just from reading the lyrics..great job!!!

• Take Me Home (Lost in Love)

  Thread: Take Me Home (Lost in Love) (0 Replies, 1,421 Views) by coral834

  
  

  hey there, trying to get any comments or opinions on this song. i also posted the link to the video if you want to hear it with music behind..Thanks Everyone...Jeff
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• Doug thank for comments and support...the MP3 and...

  Thread: Amazingly Crazy (10 Replies, 2,273 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Doug thank for comments and support...the MP3 and lyric sheet were actually sent to be demo'ed yesterday. we'll see how it goes. wish i could sing a little bit better and not have to pay for a...

• i agree. as soon as i get home later on today im...

  Thread: Lyric help..Please..Couple of Kids (Lost on the Road) (4 Replies, 1,424 Views) by coral834

  
  

  i agree. as soon as i get home later on today im going to re visit and put to the pen to the paper

• I think Doug hit the nail on the with his...

  Thread: Live Today (8 Replies, 1,713 Views) by coral834

  
  

  I think Doug hit the nail on the with his "grassroots" comparison. I couldn't agree more..

• Awesome job...for me when I read a lot of the...

  Thread: Temporary Fix (Feb. 2013) (5 Replies, 1,840 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Awesome job...for me when I read a lot of the lyrics on this site it's hard to visualize and hear the lyrics to music....not sure why but it is...not with this song though..I can hear it as soon as I...

• awesome...Thank You Kerri

  Thread: Amazingly Crazy (10 Replies, 2,273 Views) by coral834

  
  

  awesome...Thank You Kerri

• your welcome...ya those lines for whatever reason...

  Thread: See you in tears (5 Replies, 1,139 Views) by coral834

  
  

  your welcome...ya those lines for whatever reason really stood out...maybe thats a good thing? thanks for the comments inmy other posts..
  
  keep writing bro

• you made day bro..thanks for checking out the...

  Thread: Amazingly Crazy (10 Replies, 2,273 Views) by coral834

  
  

  you made day bro..thanks for checking out the song..so country for sure....im rolling with it.;.thanks again

• right on brother thanks for the reply and...

  Thread: Lyric help..Please..Couple of Kids (Lost on the Road) (4 Replies, 1,424 Views) by coral834

  
  

  right on brother thanks for the reply and words..i think i can def use it and turn it in to a bridge

• honestly the fact that your only 14 and a writing...

  Thread: this isn't a fairytale (4 Replies, 1,470 Views) by coral834

  
  

  honestly the fact that your only 14 and a writing lyrics speaks volumes.. whether they're good or bad. i wish i would have started when i was 14...keep it up, keep learning and writing..learn to...

• Amazingly Crazy

  Thread: Amazingly Crazy (10 Replies, 2,273 Views) by coral834

  
  

  any advise or comments would be greatly appreciated... i just posted a link to it on you tube so you can hear the music behind it.
  
  its written in open dsus2...not sure what i would call it as far...

• Lyric help..Please..Couple of Kids (Lost on the Road)

  Thread: Lyric help..Please..Couple of Kids (Lost on the Road) (4 Replies, 1,424 Views) by coral834

  
  

  hey there.. im kinda bummed here. i wrote this song last year and am still stuck.... it has a Toby Kieth bullets in the gun sound....kinda..or maybe a better comparison would be Cory Morrows "Love...

• over all i like it..especially the 2nd verse.. i...

  Thread: Nothing Worse Than An Old Song (3 Replies, 1,100 Views) by coral834

  
  

  over all i like it..especially the 2nd verse.. i couldn't agree more with the way music is being written these days...i believe Pat Green said it best when he called it . polished pop country...

• how about... i close my eyes and cry, your...

  Thread: Need help making a line less cheesy! (3 Replies, 1,079 Views) by coral834

  
  

  how about...
  
  i close my eyes and cry, your values are worthless
  like a parasite, i wander and wonder are you alive
  am i dreaming on the edge, is this universe dead
  mankind can try, but earth...

• i dig it...i can see it as a definite hype song...

  Thread: It's Clobberin Time (4 Replies, 1,187 Views) by coral834

  
  

  i dig it...i can see it as a definite hype song with a thick bass line..nice

• definitely can tell where you are coming from in...

  Thread: See you in tears (5 Replies, 1,139 Views) by coral834

  
  

  definitely can tell where you are coming from in your lyrics.. Id like to see/ hear less about whiskey weed and adderal to be honest..maybe try to look at writing things in a different manner..maybe...

• 2 reply average

  Thread: 2 reply average (0 Replies, 878 Views) by coral834

  
  

  I've noticed that there is about a 2 reply average for song lyric reviews...kinda disheartening... we're all suppose to be like minded irregardless of genre and musical preference..was hoping to see...

• cant say that i agree here... if i write a song,...

  Thread: Realistic laws are more likely to be respected and followed (2 Replies, 18,466 Views) by coral834

  
  

  cant say that i agree here... if i write a song, copyright it, publish it, etc.....why should that work/creation that i worked hard to create and publish automaticaly become public domain after 7-10...

• thanks john, i really appreciate it, never...

  Thread: When Morning Comes (3 Replies, 1,419 Views) by coral834

  
  

  thanks john, i really appreciate it, never thought about the brifge as being poetic.. but after reading it again and and looking your right!! hopefully others like it as well..thanks again

• When Morning Comes

  Thread: When Morning Comes (3 Replies, 1,419 Views) by coral834

  
  

  i deleted this thread

• nice...you seem to write a pretty decent there...

  Thread: Candy (3 Replies, 1,757 Views) by coral834

  
  

  nice...you seem to write a pretty decent there Jim..it actually reminded me of a Candee i met/dated/partied with when i lived in Biloxi...actually wrote a song about her..."cant hate your rain" ill...

• tell us like it is brother!!!!! no doubt what...

  Thread: Looks Are Everything (1 Replies, 982 Views) by coral834

  
  

  tell us like it is brother!!!!! no doubt what this song it about.. like it..do you have a you tube or sound cloud link for it

• nice..paints good picture....and story, when i...

  Thread: Get Away (2 Replies, 985 Views) by coral834

  
  

  nice..paints good picture....and story, when i read it i get a Texas Red Dirt feel to it...

• to me it seems more straight up poetry than a...

  Thread: Everything (6 Replies, 2,854 Views) by coral834

  
  

  to me it seems more straight up poetry than a song.. i can picture me at a poetry reading and hear someone reading something like this...i do like it however, and hope you dont take it as something...

• Jim ive read through your song several...

  Thread: Pictures Outlive People (1 Replies, 877 Views) by coral834

  
  

  Jim
  
  ive read through your song several times...this is my 1st lyric only review..its quite a but different than a review with music in a genere..but im gonna give it a shot and hope i can get some...