Search Results

Search took 0.00 seconds.

• Search Results

• OMG yeah, you got was I was singing about, thanks...

  Thread: explore the truth (2 Replies, 3,726 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  OMG yeah, you got was I was singing about, thanks for commenting, also thanks very much for saying you like my song. Yeah, I like this guy who has no idea, he acts like I don't matter to him in this...

• It's alright for a first time songwriter, I've...

  Thread: the way of love (3 Replies, 3,939 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  It's alright for a first time songwriter, I've just started, so Im in the same position .I would suggest, maybe using a thesaurus so your words are more detailed and complex, the use of words are a...

• explore the truth

  Thread: explore the truth (2 Replies, 3,726 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  People, aren't meant to become lost, in, your head,
  Im starting to notice, that you might be brain, dead
  Walking past me, as if I'm behind a, glass door,
  I'm certainly not, the person you...

• Good use of words :)

  Thread: Title: Cry For All (2 Replies, 1,941 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Good use of words :)

• I really like this song, lots if meaning...

  Thread: Title: Should Know (1 Replies, 1,855 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  I really like this song, lots if meaning disguised as words, its great, I look forward to reading all your other songs :)

• Hi, this is one of those songs which gets stuck...

  Thread: Title: I can wait (2 Replies, 2,344 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Hi, this is one of those songs which gets stuck in your head for a while, good job. Is this a slow song, or pop, or is it another genre, good job :)

• Aww nearly made me cry, this is reaaaaaaaly good,...

  Thread: I See (5 Replies, 2,642 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Aww nearly made me cry, this is reaaaaaaaly good, I love it, its so meaningful, do you write songs about how your emotions are taking over your body and how you relationships are? If so, I feel so...

• Hi, I like this song, the verses are nice and...

  Thread: Let Me Down (1 Replies, 1,655 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Hi, I like this song, the verses are nice and short, but meaningfully and easy to remember, Yeh i really like it :)

• i never knew, my urge for you, was this hard to hide

  Thread: i never knew, my urge for you, was this hard to hide (0 Replies, 1,748 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Hi, my name is Sophie,this is my 4th song I think, I'm 13 and the commas in the lyrics, are pauses in the music, so the reader understands what the rhythm is like, please leave a comment, if you can...

• Thank you for commenting, most people just read...

  Thread: Getting over you, may take a while (8 Replies, 3,020 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Thank you for commenting, most people just read the lyrics without doing anything. Thank you :)

• Thanks so much for commenting, Yeh all of my...

  Thread: Getting over you, may take a while (8 Replies, 3,020 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Thanks so much for commenting, Yeh all of my songs are about what I have experienced or going through, I sound like a saddo really. I never thought my songs were good, but my friend thought...

• Yeh, the commas are slow pauses in the music, so...

  Thread: Getting over you, may take a while (8 Replies, 3,020 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Yeh, the commas are slow pauses in the music, so the listener could understand what the rhythm was like, and thank you very much for commenting :)

• Hiya, it is quite good actually, worded well, but...

  Thread: One Last Kiss. (3 Replies, 2,312 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Hiya, it is quite good actually, worded well, but I think you use the words "one last kiss" too much. The three words are at the end of each verse and chorus, maybe limit it to only a couple times,...

• Getting over you, may take a while

  Thread: Getting over you, may take a while (8 Replies, 3,020 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Pillows aren't made, to absorb your tears,
  But I can't help it, if you ignore me, for the rest of my years.
  I thought that, you were the one that my heart would chase,
  But all I want, is for my...

• Ooh, I enjoyed that, pretty cool, I loved the...

  Thread: From The Inside Out (Now) (1 Replies, 2,466 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Ooh, I enjoyed that, pretty cool, I loved the last bit, good job mate :D good luck on Ur future songs x

• Hi, its a well written song, but maybe extend it...

  Thread: Teardrops in a story (3 Replies, 2,475 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Hi, its a well written song, but maybe extend it a bit longer, to make it more meaning full and you can feel the emotion in your words, keep up the good work :)

• Hi, I like this song, really catchy and...

  Thread: Tell Me (5 Replies, 2,815 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Hi, I like this song, really catchy and meaning-full, I love the BRIDGE, good job squishy3, keep writing and good luck x

• I will always be here

  Thread: I will always be here (0 Replies, 1,988 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Hi, I'm 13 and this is my second song, I know its a bit long, but it is supposed to be I love longer songs, I get more emotional. Please comment and I would love if you put in your own opinions and...

• It's funny you said that because I posted it on...

  Thread: First friends now strangers. (4 Replies, 2,744 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  It's funny you said that because I posted it on yahoo answers and they said to make the chorus a bit shorter, but I did like the original better than this version, thanks for the advise x

• First friends now strangers.

  Thread: First friends now strangers. (4 Replies, 2,744 Views) by sophieB

  
  

  Hi, I'm 13 and this is my first song that I've written, I have changed it a bit from my original, but it still probably needs improvement.
  
  Verse 1
  First time I saw you, I knew you were the one...