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I´m not me
Thread: I´m not me (0 Replies, 1,971 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Chorus:
I´m not me?!
That I´m not me?!
What you´re talking…about Doctor
You´re crazy
And not me!
No Dark One in…me erased a border
I graduated the best university
I´m working in the best... -
Dead boys don´t cry
Thread: Dead boys don´t cry (0 Replies, 1,196 Views) by Hugo Zhor
I´m too young to be a father
Go to get an abortion please
No-one took me seriously
About the one that should not be
All I wanted was to have some fun
A twist of fate came suddenly
He´s just... -
In the name of H.M.
Thread: In the name of H.M. (0 Replies, 1,077 Views) by Hugo Zhor
What is making us united
For what we are here tonight and
What is that we all adore
Keep on fighting forevermore
It´s
Power – from neverending source
Power – with everlasting force
That... -
Thank you.
Thread: Fight for your life (6 Replies, 2,377 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Thank you.
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Thank you both. You´re right. It´s fast metal...
Thread: Fight for your life (6 Replies, 2,377 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Thank you both. You´re right. It´s fast metal song!
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Saviour or Fool
Thread: Saviour or Fool (0 Replies, 1,538 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Already your little eyes had to
See lots of fear and pain
Daily you met broken people who
Lived only in vain
When you were born you knew rotten part
Of dirty town
With fear grief and pain was... -
I like it. Specially this line "Dollar bills wont...
Thread: The Traveler's Road (1 Replies, 1,843 Views) by Hugo Zhor
I like it. Specially this line "Dollar bills wont plant your seed"
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Thank you both for your comments.
Thread: The choice / Death or Life (3 Replies, 1,706 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Thank you both for your comments.
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The choice / Death or Life
Thread: The choice / Death or Life (3 Replies, 1,706 Views) by Hugo Zhor
The choice
Master of Life: „What do you want? Death or Life?“
Man: „Oh it´s just an easy answer, just Life!“
Master of Life: „and what do you do for Life?“
Man: „Oh?“
Master of Life: „You... -
Fight for your life
Thread: Fight for your life (6 Replies, 2,377 Views) by Hugo Zhor
So many years
I´ve been living in slavery
And waiting for my release
„Never again
Surrender to your enemy!“
My dying father told me
But I thought that I wouldn´t be a strong
Now I know my... -
Night of the Fright
Thread: Night of the Fright (0 Replies, 1,421 Views) by Hugo Zhor
The night is beginning to rule
There is no light
Blowing wind is so cool
Moon is bright
Because she´s coming with power
And silent flight
Will end at your place in hour
When you´ll know…the... -
I like it very much. Great content!
I totally...
Thread: Could've Had the Moon (1 Replies, 1,973 Views) by Hugo Zhor
I like it very much. Great content!
I totally understand this verse: -
Fire
Thread: Fire (0 Replies, 1,658 Views) by Hugo Zhor
The calm is before the storm
Power of new destruction is born
Now I can feel that it is near
Raging fire´s rushing here
Bridge:
Now – I must be care
How – when the fire is everywhere!
... -
I like a melody and a flow.
Thread: sea leaves (8 Replies, 2,543 Views) by Hugo Zhor
I like a melody and a flow.
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I like it. It´s great idea. Verse "Age is just a...
Thread: Forbidden </3 (1 Replies, 1,976 Views) by Hugo Zhor
I like it. It´s great idea. Verse "Age is just a number" reveals all. I think you should call it "Age is just a number" and write chorus about this verse. Great one. Carry on!
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Dracula
Thread: Dracula (0 Replies, 1,426 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Have you ever thought about a time when you sleep?
Have you ever heard something wicked this way creeps?
Do you think it´s not true and I am just a liar?
Do you know something about marks of real... -
The Curse / Wolf
Thread: The Curse / Wolf (0 Replies, 1,390 Views) by Hugo Zhor
The Curse
Sh*t!
What was that?!
Something hit my car!
Animal
Like it´s dead
Lying on the road
Now I´m coming closer -
Stranger in a strange land
Thread: Stranger in a strange land (0 Replies, 1,457 Views) by Hugo Zhor
After two long years in hell
Fighting killing
Trying to survive and
Living on my own
Neverending nights and days
Hoping dreaming
They´ve come to an end
Now I´m coming home -
Conscience
Thread: Conscience (0 Replies, 1,565 Views) by Hugo Zhor
I am mighty
King of death
Our enemies
Will die in flames
I´m the master
No way back
I´ve given command
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Lyrical and musical it´s great!
I´m not sure...
Thread: Only Fourteen (5 Replies, 2,000 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Lyrical and musical it´s great!
I´m not sure about content. If you mean this content with a sarcasm, it´s ok. If not, it seems to me too much adult for 14 years old, if you know what I mean. I think... -
Ok. You can try market my song writing. Good luck.
Thread: Cross the line (4 Replies, 1,666 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Ok. You can try market my song writing. Good luck.
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Resignation
Thread: Resignation (0 Replies, 1,576 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Another f*cking morning
The alarm clock is screaming
To irritate my feelings
To get me off my bed
Bridge:
Everyday the same
Losing all game before its start
Sick society
Tries to make me... -
Screams into the night
Thread: Screams into the night (0 Replies, 1,513 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Chorus:
Screams into the night
Just your screams into the night
No one around…to help you
Screams into the night
Just your screams into the night
No one will get you out…but you
Again keep... -
Thank you again SK´nDeep. About audio I can´t...
Thread: Cross the line (4 Replies, 1,666 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Thank you again SK´nDeep. About audio I can´t play any instrument on it (guitar, bass, drums), so no audio. You´re right it´s fast agressive metal song with screaming parts in rage!
But I think you... -
Thank you SK´nDeep for your comment. I´m glad you...
Thread: Back where I belong (2 Replies, 1,767 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Thank you SK´nDeep for your comment. I´m glad you like. Yes it´s slower metal or rock song.
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Back where I belong
Thread: Back where I belong (2 Replies, 1,767 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Waking up
To another hazy morning
With a headache
And everything is burning
Realize
My dream has ended so soon
Reality
appearing around me to rule -
Cross the line
Thread: Cross the line (4 Replies, 1,666 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Chorus:
I´ve crossed the line as you say
It´s just your phrase and I don´t care
I´ll do it again if I want
It´s my life and not yours!
I have lost something precious
And everything comes down... -
My only friend
Thread: My only friend (0 Replies, 1,552 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Let me be
In my melancholy
Your charity
Is too late for me
Leave my scars
On my blackened soul
And my pain
They´ll never let me go -
Angel of my dream
Thread: Angel of my dream (0 Replies, 1,618 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Stop to complaining
Stop to sigh
No use in crying
All of your life
Stop to screaming
Stop to hate
No use in believing
You´re bad luck´s mate -
Out of my reach
Thread: Out of my reach (0 Replies, 1,715 Views) by Hugo Zhor
All of my life
I used to fight and reach for all
With no silver spoon
In my small mouth I was born
Nothing came free
In easy way to me no
After a few falls
I used to rely on my own -
I am living high and low
Thread: I am living high and low (0 Replies, 1,596 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Noone of my days is the same
Everyday comes a new surpise for me
I´m not a ruler of this game
I don´t know what waits inside of me
Bridge:
If it´s a good health or if it´s a pain
The last... -
Compromise (Legacy of fools)
Thread: Compromise (Legacy of fools) (0 Replies, 1,866 Views) by Hugo Zhor
I said do as you are told
´Cause I´m right everyday
Don´t even try to back-talk
´Cause you´re my son okay?!
Holy sh*t!
I can´t stand it anymore
I´ll get away and slamm the door
Rather live... -
Mr. N´s field
Thread: Mr. N´s field (0 Replies, 1,655 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Oh God I am here again
On this field that drives me insane
I´m touching every rocks
And I can keep things from getting worse…but I can´t fix it!
Oh Doc now I need your help
This may be in my... -
Nothing matters
Thread: Nothing matters (0 Replies, 1,956 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Chorus:
Nothing matters but whatever that brings you joy
Nothing matters but whatever you fully enjoy
Nothing matters but emotions you can really feel
Nothing matters only feelings they are only... -
Great lyrics. I love line "Murder my misery" Nice...
Thread: What should I call this? (7 Replies, 3,546 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Great lyrics. I love line "Murder my misery" Nice one!
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Remains
Thread: Remains (0 Replies, 1,515 Views) by Hugo Zhor
When I saw you about
After a half year
I could not believe my
Eyes staring
Where was strong man with smile
Always ready to go
Now left shred of yourself
Just shadow -
The Sixth daughter of a sixth daughter
Thread: The Sixth daughter of a sixth daughter (0 Replies, 1,365 Views) by Hugo Zhor
She is so beautiful divine
Golden hair red lips and blue eyes
Bright angel in dress made of white
Her body her beauty no one can defy
Now she has raven hair and brown eyes
In shiny black... -
Ear on the wall
Thread: Ear on the wall (1 Replies, 2,536 Views) by Hugo Zhor
You must hear every and each words
Spoken around you
Every useless word people say
Is waiting for you
You walk around and pretending
You don´t care at all
Just after speaking start your ears... -
To deaf ear
Thread: To deaf ear (0 Replies, 1,624 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Again I´m fighting your ego
Like so many times before
Your self-importance ego
Without self-reflecting note
As we´re setting compromise
You explode like dynamite
Bridge:
I´m sick and tired... -
Collector of the dead
Thread: Collector of the dead (2 Replies, 1,534 Views) by Hugo Zhor
She:
Now it seems to me
On the edge of the world
On the edge I cry…I cry
Unawares it is
Now my world has a frame
I´m a butterfly…just a butterfly
Bridge: -
Nice idea about a title. Thank you.
Thread: Sightseeing memories (2 Replies, 2,187 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Nice idea about a title. Thank you.
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Thank you Moonride.
You´re right. I missed...
Thread: Children of the damned (3 Replies, 2,197 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Thank you Moonride.
You´re right. I missed some words because of melody.
She don´t need (eyes) instincts are her stare. -
Sightseeing memories
Thread: Sightseeing memories (2 Replies, 2,187 Views) by Hugo Zhor
After a long time
I´m walking now…in my hometown
I´ve got a time
No need to run…sightseeing on my own
Walking this street
Watching buldings…all these witnesses
Of my good times
And falling... -
Children of the damned
Thread: Children of the damned (3 Replies, 2,197 Views) by Hugo Zhor
She´s walking with a white cane
How many times she learnt this way
She don´t need instincts are her stare
God let her like the others be
Chorus
Children of the damned
Children of the damned... -
Deadly mistake
Thread: Deadly mistake (1 Replies, 1,779 Views) by Hugo Zhor
(Boy in love):
You are my first love
After long searching
Of you I can´t get enough
can´t wait for loving
I would do all for you
So when you asked me
To do this blood test for you
It didn´t... -
If
Thread: If (0 Replies, 1,397 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Before if I knew
What I have learnt and found out now
Nothing would be screwed
Up all would be managed…successfully
If I haven´t gone
To this bad place in very bad time
Nothing would happen... -
Golden years
Thread: Golden years (1 Replies, 2,286 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Sitting in your hazy room
Pictures in your hands
Feeling old past years perfume
Memories drifting in your head
There were the days of hapiness
Full of energy
Laughing smiling without an end... -
Manchanger
Thread: Manchanger (0 Replies, 1,705 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Your parents were teaching you
To be hearted telling truth
Be rightful fight for the rights but
Also can make excuse
As child you were living
In a world without a sin
You thought it would... -
Ahoj Moonride
thank you for your great...
Thread: Dreams (never satisfied) (4 Replies, 2,367 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Ahoj Moonride
thank you for your great suggestions and nice english lesson :D -
Thank you for your comment.
About missing words,...
Thread: Dreams (never satisfied) (4 Replies, 2,367 Views) by Hugo Zhor
Thank you for your comment.
About missing words, there is different melody so rhyming verses aren´t the same long.