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Thread: Paper Hearts (1 Replies, 3,325 Views) by bearheart
Paper Hearts
Tear a page from this untold story
Fold the corners to form your glory
Built on false hope & ugly lies
Holding onto nothing but faulty ties
Misery will be sure to follow
In a life...
Thread: Breath (5 Replies, 4,087 Views) by bearheart
There's some nice rhymes here but In my opinion it seems a bit repetitive but the bones of what you got aren't bad.
Thread: Facade (0 Replies, 903 Views) by bearheart
Facade
Stroke my ego, let me loose
Put my neck right through the noose
Hard times coming down that road
Better get ready let's lock & load
Mouth full of lead with a head full of pain
No more...
Thread: Autumn Breeze (3 Replies, 3,842 Views) by bearheart
Thank you so much for all the feedback & support. I completely agree I need to work on my linear structure. The new lyrics I'm working on I think you will be very pleased with. :)
Thread: Wish I had another cigarette (3 Replies, 3,048 Views) by bearheart
I can really relate to this great rhymes & structure.
Thread: When Worlds Collide (17 Replies, 13,087 Views) by bearheart
I really enjoy the subject matter good lyric & rhyme structure as well.
Thread: Autumn Breeze (3 Replies, 3,842 Views) by bearheart
Autumn Breeze
My mind drifts to a better place
With nothing to fear or nothing to hide
Until I see your face & I start to shake
Your not the same man that my mother loved
She had the beauty of...
Thread: Quicksand (1 Replies, 3,074 Views) by bearheart
Quicksand
I need to hear that whisper
That seductive sound of winter
Chills me to the bone to hear her
begging me, begging me
Give my life to you
Live my life in servitude
No more giving in...
Thread: Sins & Scars (1 Replies, 3,410 Views) by bearheart
Sins & Scars
The rivers are rising
Reaching up towards the shore
Together we were watching
As we made our way to the door
Now theres only seconds left
Before you realize
We have to end...
Thread: Bound By Doubt (2 Replies, 2,706 Views) by bearheart
Bound By Doubt
By Michael Snyder
My eyes grow cold from what I've seen
Ice spreads through my veins
Plagued by where I've been
Can't hide from this pain
Words like chains to make me stay...
Thread: Old Wound (2 Replies, 3,662 Views) by bearheart
Old Wound
Hear the storm rage outside my door
Shakes my bones right to the floor
Listen to a whisper build to a shout
Give me strength to fight this now
Fear the fist but stand your ground
Soon...
Thread: Hands Of Time (2 Replies, 3,079 Views) by bearheart
Hands Of Time
By Michael Snyder
Here I am left with no excuses
No more hiding from the truth
Lay it out in the open
Write it on the walls for all to see
When your left with only yourself
You...