How r my lyrics?-Its my turn to cry

It’s my turn to cry
She left me high ‘n’ dry
It’s hard not to cry
When you’re left high ‘n’dry

Serves me right!
I left you that night
Serves me right!
She’s left me tonight

When I left you high ’n’ dry
To call you I didn’t try
Told you many a lie
To sleep with her,I did lie

Serves me right!
I left you that night
Serves me right!
She’s left me tonight

Had my share of highs
Now its time for sighs
Nev’r did think of vows
Its time to face the lows

Serves me right!
I left you that night
Serves me right!
She’s left me tonight

I can't tell if your talkin out of your *** or if this is from the heart man, this is more like half of a chorus and random words. You need to make the lines longer, and make sure it's straight from the heart bro.

It's absolute shxt.

Thanks for the candid remarks. A spade must be called a spade

I'm sorry for bein' such a bxtch, but it's really not good. Maybe you should try a different style of writing ?