I Wonder

Sometimes I wonda where im goin when i die
what if the religion way of life is a lie
no heaven nor hell, erased from existence
without resistance
you could gone this F**kin' instance
Thats why i keep distance from everyone
Emotions are cool but I'd rather have none
Some say this is judgement, aint this somethin
a man made life, just leave me in a murky dungeon
leave me a notebook dont feed me
I'll have my rhymes cooked
live off my lyrics aint that a great look check it
you work to live your life
i thought about it in the kitchen gazen
at a ginsu knife. F**K a wife
these days i dont have trust
been down that road
like a old bike begining to rust
Some days i cuss becuz my lust flew into a gust
and when i got it back it turned to black dust
from dusk to dawn, i sing a sad song
write this book and figure out what i did wrong
not long till i yawn my last breath
by now, back then i thought I'd be more than
much less of a person. As days go by my eyes just worsen
Thats it i cant take this burden.
It burns my soul's hurtin'...**** it leaving this world
im done lurkin'

love some opinions.... i needs some fixin but this was the rough

This has some good lines but it needs a lot of fixin' though ...
The shxt you just wrote in another thread (Piss me off by Tyler) is actually better. I like that one.

thanks lol...yeh it was the rough but i just needed to see wat the reaction was it'll get fixed eventually ha...along wit all the other verses