In the middle of the night .

So please don´t be to hard on me , cause i haven´t been writing lyrics for to long , and not very much hip hop lyrics , mostly love poems , so please don´t be too hard on me .

I´ve been up all night . just to pass on this little story ,
So here it goes , everybody come on gather up and listen now

Tell the story of my life , in the middle of the night
at the age of seven , found out that love is heaven
On a sad day , we just moved away
Had you on my mind for years , Cried a thousand tears
At the age of ten , found out people do a lot of sin
People arent always nice , its like a game of dice
six being the best , and one being the worst


Being up all night getting no sleep
Putting the story of my life on this beat


seventeen now , still wondering how
Will i ever get it right
That´s why i´m this night
Will i send my slife with you
Girl honestly i have no clue
At a cross roads in my life
Will you be my wife




It´s just the concept of what I´m working on right now , thank you all for reading and I would be very thankful for any pointer´s to make be a better lyricist .

Keep writing. That is how you will progress. You can be told what to do from what is seen in a writing but only you can determine where you are strong and weak. I wish it could have been longer. It seems you have more to say...

I had so much more to say , Cause I´m goint trough a really rough patch at the moment . Tonight I´ll try to finish it .

Keep your mind clear of abstructions and focus on the emotions you want to come across and how you want them to. I hope your situation gets better, all the same. I will wait to see what you have next...