Slow Waltz

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  1. LyricsAngel's Avatar

    LyricsAngel said:

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    I lay awake at night
    As the candles burn out and that smell of cheap perfume fades
    A jazzy song keeps repeating in my head
    "I cried for you" it says, oh how I did!

    Today has been an empty day
    And now I think about it while I stare at the ceiling
    No sad lyrics can compare to what I'm feeling
    Everything in this room screams "I need you baby"

    -Chorus-
    Heavy words are falling like tears
    Across my skin they dance
    A slow waltz with the scent of you that lingers
    On my clothes
    Every touch, every kiss, I feel too much
    But at the same time I'm so numb I can't even believe you exist
    I whisper your name in a slow waltz of pain

    It's much too hot in here
    I'm suffocating, I'm choking on my own will to fly
    On my window there are the tears of the sky
    Because the candle flame has just dried mine

    There are no wishing stars tonight
    And today I didn't catch 11:11
    You are the wish I send everyday to heaven
    For the angels to grant it, I'll wait forever

    -Chorus-
    Heavy words are falling like tears
    Across my skin they dance
    A slow waltz with the scent of you that lingers
    On my clothes
    Every touch, every kiss, I feel too much
    But at the same time I'm so numb I can't even believe you exist
    I whisper your name in a slow waltz of pain

    -Bridge-
    This is your air and this is your atmosphere
    This is your mind and this is your very last tear
    The last 3 a.m I catch with your picture in my hand
    Because for now, all that is mine is

    -Chorus-
    Heavy words that are falling like tears
    Across my skin they dance
    A slow waltz with the scent of you that lingers
    On my clothes
    Every touch, every kiss, I feel too much
    But at the same time I'm so numb I can't even believe you exist
    I whisper your name in a slow waltz of pain
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.
     
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    As impressive as ever, dear. It seems so sad yet has a gentleness at the same time. Add this to your "well done" collection. At least, that is what I believe. I do not think you will dissapoint me with anything you write, indeed. Wonderful job!
     
  3. LyricsAngel's Avatar

    LyricsAngel said:

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    Thank you very much I wrote it in like....15 minutes or so haha ....
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.
     
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    Nanashi said:

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    Even more impressive! Not so for me. It takes me an hour or two. That just means you have all your thoughts together.
     
  5. Mon said:

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    Great lyrics just like ur other ones
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Another treasure Angel. I should also confess (like you did) that sometimes I can't stop tears from rolling down my cheek. This was no exception, in fact it's near the top of my list of your greats.
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    I believe crying isn't a sign of weakness. It's a sign of strength, of the courage to admit how you feel
    Anyway, thank you for taking the time to comment on like...all my songs. It really means a lot to me.
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.