Just a something..

Well I am not going anywhere right now, so I could use some tips or just comments , thanks.
Oh and please ignore some grammer mistakes, still learning english .
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I pick a pen and write some lyrics ,
To express myself, my disgraceful feelings .
This is the only way to do it right ,
Cuz all the others fled as from the fire in the night .

Only words can sort it out ,
Written on white paper, without any doubt ,
They become living thoughts of my messed up head ,
Feeding of my sins as of bred

Growing in size they become threats, for control,
Over my mind and body...they morph me into doll .
Like a puppeteers they strangle my consciousness ,
And in the final act - throw it in a pit, that's bottomless

Like homeless kids aren't loved by theyr selfish mothers ,
I no longer care for others ,
Because I'am no longer led by emotions .
And still ... For ever I'll be swimming in their oceans...


Night was long,
And the wind that blew was strong...
Nothing like a summer breeze...
...I'am glad you weren't here .
It didn't have anyone else to squeeze .
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Well, I really liked this, some parts more than others, but I liked this. Well done