When I first met you, something happened
that was a total surprise
I had dreamed about you before,
but then I looked into your eyes...

I saw the most tender angel, my love,
the sweetest soul that could ever be
And when we first kissed, I couldn't believe
what was happening to me

You took me to the stars
with just one look
And then you kissed my heart
Oh I could write a book ...

A perfect love story
The most exquisite song ...
But then I left you to wonder
What went wrong

There's no answer now...

My baby, forever you will ever be
The sweetest dream that couldn't happen to me
Do you know, please tell me you can see
That I would die to live with you in eternity

Our perfect love story
We sang the sweetest song
But I left you to wonder
Just what went wrong

You wanted me to be
The one who was strong
But I left you broken...
Wondering what went wrong

And for us I cry

The days are gone, we can't recover
But I refuse to accept that our dream is over
Baby can you just save the dream with me?
Can we write it in history so others can see?

Our perfect love story
We sang the sweetest song
In exquisite harmony
In love so sweet and strong

My baby, forever you will ever be
The sweetest dream that couldn't happen to me
Do you know, please tell me you can see
That I would die to live with you in eternity

Nothing is impossible
We lived it for a time and now
You'll always be my baby
In all timelessness of time

My baby! Forever you will ever be
The sweetest dream that couldn't happen to me
Do you know, please tell me you can see
That I would die to live with you in eternity

You wanted me to be
The one who was strong
But I left you crying in wonder
Of what went wrong

Our perfect love story
We sang the sweetest song
In exquisite harmony
In love so sweet and strong

And forever I cry
(I love you)

~ ~ ~

This is not finished, not assembled as I want, but I wanted to put it out here. The last line would be something like the end of the song Unintended (Muse). Otherwise I'm wide open to suggestions and even the toughest criticism... I love the idea of this, and I would really love to pull it together and finish the music. But I do need to compress some of the lyrics... among other things ... maybe lose the last verse/chorus iteration, or even more, whatever... Any help?

Bump. Just want this to be above the last one I posted

I saw the most tender angel, my love,
the sweetest soul that could ever be
And when we first kissed, I couldn't believe
what was happening to me

You took me to the stars
with just one look
And then you kissed my heart
Oh I could write a book ...

.This.Reminds.Me.Of.Painful.Things. *sniff*
Everything you write is awesome and gets to my heart immediately.

Angel ... <3
Thank you soooo so much, as always

A new favourite by you! I am surprised it is not yet finished, it sounds so near complete. Just a little longer I assume? This is so beautiful and it flows so well...You will have to do something with these besides post it here.

I really liked it. You're really good. I like how you interperted the idea of the story behind the lyrics. For next song, try staying to that subject and not straying away with more words of feeling. Over-all, though, really good.

Thanks for your comment and as to your suggestion, I can only say that this whole thing is the subject, the story. Maybe it's too complicated but it's an honest lyrical intrepretation of a beginning and an end. Or a never-end

Nanashi thanks so much, as always!
I can't be around long today, had a bad sinus infection over the weekend and and my face and eyes still kinda bother me. I'll catch up soon.

Happy New Year to you all and whoever else might drop through here

Edit: Btw, this is finished, except for a final decision on music and maybe a little rearranging of verses/chorus.

like this

Thanks bud!

I really like the way this progresses. The flow is excellent. Some beautiful thought and play on words. I really like it. Great lyrics!!! Make minor adjustments as needed when you create the music, but keep as much of these lyrics intact as possible. This song should be produced.

Well done! Awesome!

Thanks so much Wayne, and believe me I'm gonna put it to music sometime in the next few months. Wish I could say sooner, but that's the best I can say for now. Again thanks a bunch