Without You (I'm Gone)

Another road, another town
Nothing left, I’ve gone around,
I’m going, I’m gone
One more night, with no light
Nothing’s left, nothing’s right
I’m going, I’m gone

This path I walk is nothing less
It’s always full of emptiness
Without you, without you
It’s never right, I’m always wrong
It starts to fade, I’m all but gone
Without you, I’m all but gone

So ill move on, from town to town
It’s just not right, you’re not around
It’s going, it’s gone
I’ll always be searching for what I cannot find,
It’s always you, who’s on my mind cause
You’re going, you’re gone

This path I walk is nothing less
It’s always full of emptiness
Without you, without you
It’s never right, I’m always wrong
It starts to fade, I’m all but gone
Without you, I’m all but gone

I cannot tell what my eyes see
All I know is now, you’re not with me
We’re going, we’re gone
Another road, another town
Nothings left, I’ve gone around
Without you, I’m gone

Excellent writing, I've read 3 of yours now. Every one of them says a lot, very very well. I'm anxious to read more from you.

thanks! any ciritcism on any? id love to know everyone's thoughts on all of them!