would like some feedback on these lyrics

TOO SOON

So they took me to the place of constant sleep
only dreams to keep me company
i saw a picture of my mother
when she was so much younger
next to a clock that had stopped
no need for time any longer
it won't make you stronger
or free you from the shock
and despite sadness and gloom
i've realized its just too soon

then they flung me back to reality
where my dreams drifted to melancholy
i still remember what i saw
my father at the door
a rope around his neck
his feet off the floor
a note "i love you all"
left amongst the wreck
and despite sadness and gloom
i've realized its just too soon

they brought me to a place near nowhere
and said it was where i belonged
i saw my brother and my sister
playing mrs and mr
but they would never grow old
they were on the tracks
when the train attacked
still leaves me feeling cold
and despite sadness and gloom
i've realized its just too soon

any comments would be helpful

Oh my gosh... a lot of pain and frustration. Really good message. Keep it up. Write a little bit everyday. Even if its stupid save it. You might like the idea and keep working towards it. Don't be embarrassed or anything. Let people see your stuff when you're ready. Its good.

Anymore opinion would be helpful

Any other feedback would be useful