Broken Memories

If you could give me some feedback on this, that would be great.

Broken Memories

V1
My eyes are burning
Inside my skull
Trying to figure out
What the hell is wrong with me
I can not see
Why I miss you so much

Chorus
It’s consuming me
Driving me insane
No one can ever
See me like this
And I break down
As I remember our first kiss
Memories
Memories
These memories
Are killing me
Memories
Memories
These Memories
Are killing me
Broken memories!

V2
My brain is bleeding
My anger seething
I keep hurting myself like this
I hate you
But I shoot to miss
I’m going crazy

V3
I thought we were perfect
Thought we were worth it
But good things can’t last forever
I feel like my head is severed
The killer is inside my mind
When I look back in time

It's quite good, actually. Goes by a little fast, but that's not an issue. Perhaps a little more descriptiveness? But I think that the bare words themselves leave just enough mystery. Good job, keep writing more!

Ooooh man this is too good ... I can identify with this and feel it so so much. Very very nice. More!

edit... PZ, looks like we almost tripped over each other ;-)