Title: So Cruel (let me know what you think)

you've turn my world upside down
then i destoryed yours
you've starved me and near exhauste me
everything i've done i've done for you
yet it was not enough for you
you stabbed me and left me to bleed

(chorus)
your eyes can be so cruel
just as i can be so cruel
look at your world as it burns
watch as your freinds fade away
you can run but you can excape
your eyes can be so cruel
just as i can bo so cruel
i chased away your fears
watch as i revive your fears
your eyes can be so cruel
just as i can be so cruel
(chorus end)

i was your for a long time
making your dream become realaity
i did as you commanded me
yet it was not enopugh for you
you left me bleeding on the ground
the heaven cry with my pain
how can an angel be in so much pain

(chorusx2)

angels are ment to be saviors
not ment to destory
but an angel can only take so much
before they break
a broken, bleeding angel can destory
i'm so broken i can't be repaired
watch as i amke you and your world burn
now you shall parish!

(chorusx3)

Hm, you know I didn't see these lyrics before when I went online the other day..

These are actually brilliant i loved the way you put it together Mr. Alex x)

Very good lyrics =) The only thing i could suggest is that you should avoid using the same word in a pair of lines i.e

"everything i've done i've done for you
yet it was not enough for you"

Because it causes a breakdown in the flow of the lyrics, Great job anyway XD