Behind Closed Eyes

If you can't tell the truth,
then try your best at lies.

That's all you're ****ing doing anyways.

I'm seeing red in every corner,
and the clock is running out of time.

Please baby start counting your days.

Label it,
stick it on a wall.
Hearts collide,
hearts divide,
life rolls like a ball.
Maybe some day you'll see that you're not so special.
But in my eyes you were always substantial.

Shuffling down the street,
burdens kicking at my feet.

The wildlife of love come out for a treat.

Was life just a dream?
But when my eyes are closed,

I'm the person I'd finally like to meet.

Label it,
stick it on a wall.
Hearts collide,
hearts divide,
life rolls like a ball.
Maybe some day you'll see that you're not so special.
But in my eyes you were always substantial.

If you want love.
If you want care.
If you want someone,
to always be there.
If you want pain.
If you want trust.
If you want your heart,
to never bust.
Then come and take my hand,
and we'll go to sea.
Together forever,
baby just you and me.

The chorus and bridge part are really cool =) so are the verses if a little confusing in structure, good work =)

This ones alright PZ, work on the structure like the guy above said, try and put it into verses, bridges and choruses, makes easier reading. Lots of good individual lines in this one and love the title. Very imaginitive