My ex-tacy

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  1. Experimentalist's Avatar

    Experimentalist said:

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    Short but sweet, written about an ex a while back that I had gotten back with at the time



    Your hair is fair like the sun
    Your eyes green as the sea
    I can't wait to tell everyone
    It's not just you, it's you and me

    I know, we've been here before
    I picked the pieces up off the floor
    But times have changed and so have we
    But you are still my ecstacy

    And if there's only one thing left to say
    Say you'll love me till your dying day
    And say my heart is safe in your hands
    And I'll forever be your man
     
  2. PointZero's Avatar

    PointZero said:

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    Awh, this is really sweet. Not much criticism I can give because it's pretty straight-forward.
     
  3. Squishums said:

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    I like how it's short and simple haha.
    Good work keep it up

    -kthxbai
    Wait...what are you doing in my bed?