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(Verse 1)
You always think that the number,
it makes the man inside.
Never much for getting to know,
not interested in the full ride.

Break down my day after day,
shuffling through my mind,
do you see that I can't see,
the words you left behind?

(Chorus)
So I'll be waiting,
by the seashore for you to get me.
With a smile and arms wide open,
you have me.
You have me.
You have me...

(Verse 2)
So take my hand,
and together we stride,
through those fields of nonbelievers,
with love at our side.

And we don't need to regret,
our travels that we make.
It's what's on the inside,
that makes up the cake.

(Chorus)
So I'll be waiting,
by the seashore for you to get me.
With a smile and arms wide open,
you have me.
You have me.
You have me...

(?)
Photographs of what we were.
Running through my mind,
it makes me nauseous.
Maybe this time,
I can find,
the words you left behind.

Because the worlds at an end,
it's taking us down,
but we're still standing,
until it drives to the ground.

Because "I love you" is a lie,
but at least you said goodbye.

How has noone commented on this yet?!?!?!?!? Makes me a little angry

Right Point

Verse 1 = amazing (would be extremely proud of myself if I had written this

Chorus = great

Verse 2 = not sure about nonbelievers and cake being in there. Personally I would find 2 different words there to express your feeling. I think just "fields of green" would be perfect....ill leave you to decide though, ultimately its your song

And finally (?) = id change photographs for memorys, same sentiment, easier flow...in fact id be happy with just v1 chorus v2 chorus.

Seriously though, I cannot explain how good verse 1 actually is......outstanding my friend

Thank you bunch! And I agree that verse 1 is the best... and I will definitely revise this a little bit, but thanks so much for commenting!