Frienemies

You look at me,
Suddenly startin' to think a lil crazy,
Slo-uh-lee fallin' in love, and he
Doesn't seem to like the sweet feeling.
To accept the feeling.
Of me.

Thur-ahs-day, the day that is apparent-lay before Friday,
I think he's blocking out, every word I say.
We were always archenemies
Now suddenly just Frienemies, hey..


That Boy I know,
Yeah, yeah.
Can't let him go.. Go, no.

[chorus]
Do you love me?
Or do you hate me?
Or do you positively feel as if,
You're feeling a lil stiff.
On both?
Ohhhh oh,

Do you care much?
Or do you block it out?
Or do you positively feel as if,
You're feeling a lil stiff.
On both?
Ohhhh oh.
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Workin' on,
Maybe gonna sing you this song.
Cause holy shxt it's frikin been so long!
Since the last time. I've seen you.
I'm to-tah-lee craving you.
N only you.

But school is on break,
And we made the mistake.
Of being good friends
Now there. Is, no end...

So what are we supposed to be?
[what are we supposed to be?]

are you falling in love with me?

Aren't we supposed to be enemies?

Enemies? Enemies?



[chorus]
Do you love me?
Or do you hate me?
Or do you positively feel as if,
You're feeling a lil stiff.
On both?
Ohhhh oh,

Do you care much?
Or do you block it out?
Or do you positively feel as if,
You're feeling a lil stiff.
On both?
Ohhhh oh.
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[chorus]
Do you love me?
Or do you hate me?
Or do you positively feel as if,
You're feeling a lil stiff.
On both?
Ohhhh oh,

Do you care much?
Or do you block it out?
Or do you positively feel as if,
You're feeling a lil stiff.
On both?
Ohhhh oh.
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Thur-has-day..
Years n years after that dreadful day.
our wedding is being held on Sunday.
Apparent-uh-lee a day after Friday...

Hey...

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Idrk, but this was the outcome and I honestly think it's dreadful and it won't get ME a record deal but it gave meh an awesome idea

ignore the poster above me, I also think this is dreadful sorry shadow!

last lines

wedding held on sunday apparently the day after friday

Wht!!! not in my world haha

I know you wont take offence shadow but this is one of the worst youve done. keep going though

I actually agree with you, I actually LOVE you for saying that. I believe so also, a sorry song always happens to me after a writers block

Its like- I actually smiled when you said that, thanks buddie


I should edit the whole thing... I should.. Shouldn't I?

No, keep it as it was to gauge the quality of future stuff you write against. You can write something new then look at this one and think to yourself, is this new song better than the worst song I ever wrote!! If it is, your already improving!!

ps, ive just found my song box that i kept all my lyrics i wrote as a youngster in and trust me, theres some a lot worse than this in there. im going to post some of the better ones on here I think and see what yall think!

Kehehehe^^ aiight bro, I saw u wrote some new lyrics bout insomnia, I have it so let meh see xD