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I've never lost a loved one,
and I've never shed a tear,
for the ones closest to me,
to the ones that I hold dear.

I'll just have to wait for that day,
when their hearts just can't take,
what the world throws at them,
they'll fall as they quake.

They always the ones you love the most,
they're ones who want to be around forever,
because without them your life is nothing.
But if they're all still around,
and it's only time to say,
that one day,
someday,
everyone will suddenly go away.

Someone you knew passed along,
I never knew her but she seemed all right.
You're a mess and I don't understand,
but it seems like it's gonna be a long night.

They always the ones you love the most,
they're ones who want to be around forever,
because without them your life is nothing.
But if they're all still around,
and it's only time to say,
that one day,
someday,
everyone will suddenly go away.

Go out and start living your dreams.
It's what you want to do,
not what the world commands you to.
Go out and find what's real.
Stop wishing your life away,
and start getting to know what it's like to feel.

I like it. Good commentary on mourning death from an outside standpoint. Keep it up, friend!

Bloody hell point, you've come on a bit. This is much better than your old stuff. Wish I could just get a feel for the rythm of the words in song. I was cautious straight away as your first line I thought how can anyone relate to this, everyone I know has lost a loved one but I can see where your coming from. Glad your still writing and glad it seems to get better an better. Could have a real future in songwriting if you keep up the speed of this learning curve.