Miss you

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  1. Experimentalist's Avatar

    Experimentalist said:

    Default Miss you

    Every day that we're apart I find it so hard
    To get along
    With anyone and everyone I see
    They say Ive changed and this aint me

    And then they say that its all your fault
    I promised myself Id never believe
    But how can I not when your all life is about
    When your the air that I breathe

    Yes its true
    Yes its true
    I miss you
    I miss you

    The days and the months have gone by
    Unlike the feelings I have left inside
    Am I stuck with these for life
    I think Im gonna run and hide

    cus its True
    Yes its true
    I miss you
    I miss you

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    look forward to the response
     
  2. PointZero's Avatar

    PointZero said:

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    Oh man, that really hits hard. I can definitely feel this one. Great job! My only complaint is that it feels like something is missing, but I can't put my finger on it.. it's great the way it is though. Keep it up!
     
  3. ShadowLeeSharp's Avatar

    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    This song- omg I think I caught a melody for this, wow. But I can imagine a girl's vocals singing it. Hmm...
    I feel this song, I really like it, hey keep up the awesome work bro.

    Annnnd BTW bro,
    was this another one of your old songs that came out of your song box you told me about?...
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
  4. Experimentalist's Avatar

    Experimentalist said:

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    Yeah it was shadow, this one, chronic insomnia and the other one i posted, all out the box from the past
     
  5. Alyc3 said:

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    Your lyrics are simple, short, but I like them alot because they're full of meaning. You say what you need to say. Congratulations for that.