Take me as I am

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  1. Hugo Zhor said:

    Default Take me as I am

    After a long search
    I have come to view
    I was just looking
    For a dream never comes true

    Now I realize
    I´m not without faults
    That is why I have
    To expect the same from all

    Bridge:
    I can´t change you
    Now I see
    Human nature
    Is stronger than me

    So you can´t change me
    You should view
    My nature within
    Is stronger than you

    Chorus:
    Take me as I am or leave me
    ´cos I take you as you are believe me
    If you want me to change better leave me
    ´cos I don´t want you to change believe me

    Our rules are set
    We´ll both obey them
    Or we´ll break it up
    Pretending causes me pain

    Bridge:
    I can´t change you
    Now I see
    Human nature
    Is stronger than me

    So you can´t change me
    You should view
    My nature within
    Is stronger than you

    Chorus:
    Take me as I am or leave me
    ´cos I take you as you are believe me
    If you want me to change better leave me
    ´cos I don´t want you to change believe me
     
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    You really have a good way with words

    "After a long search
    I have come to view
    I was just looking
    For a dream never comes true

    Now I realize
    I´m not without faults
    That is why I have
    To expect the same from all"

    Okay this (the first part) is actually caught my eye in like, seconds.
    The only thing I'd change is probably the punctuation (I bet your like "Omgggg are you serious?")
    just so I could understand it a lil better, UNLESS that's how the song goes, like fast.

    Just to, you know. Get a good grip on the flow that's all
    Though anyways, I seriously love how you put the words together.

    No other song has caught my eyes like this LoL I normally don't post comments but I just HAD to on this one. keep up the good work bro
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
  3. Hugo Zhor said:

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    Thank you very much. I´m glad you like it.

    About the punctuation you mean to better understand the flow of the song?
    So it could be like this:

    "After a long search
    I have come to view
    I was just looking
    For a dream...never comes true

    Now I realize
    I´m not without faults
    That is why I have
    To expect...the same from all"
     
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Hm? Well yeah, like for the whole song though. haha yeah the flow of the song, unless you know, that's how the song flows. Anyways GREAT song and I look forward to seeing more of you



    -Shadow
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     

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