After a long search
I have come to view
I was just looking
For a dream never comes true
Now I realize
I´m not without faults
That is why I have
To expect the same from all
Bridge:
I can´t change you
Now I see
Human nature
Is stronger than me
So you can´t change me
You should view
My nature within
Is stronger than you
Chorus:
Take me as I am or leave me
´cos I take you as you are believe me
If you want me to change better leave me
´cos I don´t want you to change believe me
Our rules are set
We´ll both obey them
Or we´ll break it up
Pretending causes me pain
Bridge:
I can´t change you
Now I see
Human nature
Is stronger than me
So you can´t change me
You should view
My nature within
Is stronger than you
Chorus:
Take me as I am or leave me
´cos I take you as you are believe me
If you want me to change better leave me
´cos I don´t want you to change believe me
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You really have a good way with words
"After a long search
I have come to view
I was just looking
For a dream never comes true
Now I realize
I´m not without faults
That is why I have
To expect the same from all"
Okay this (the first part) is actually caught my eye in like, seconds.
The only thing I'd change is probably the punctuation (I bet your like "Omgggg are you serious?")
just so I could understand it a lil better, UNLESS that's how the song goes, like fast.
Just to, you know. Get a good grip on the flow that's all
Though anyways, I seriously love how you put the words together.
No other song has caught my eyes like this LoL I normally don't post comments but I just HAD to on this one.keep up the good work bro
ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly- -
Thank you very much. I´m glad you like it.
About the punctuation you mean to better understand the flow of the song?
So it could be like this:
"After a long search
I have come to view
I was just looking
For a dream...never comes true
Now I realize
I´m not without faults
That is why I have
To expect...the same from all" -
Hm? Well yeah, like for the whole song though.
haha yeah the flow of the song, unless you know, that's how the song flows. Anyways GREAT song and I look forward to seeing more of you
-ShadowImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-