Come Home

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  1. MoonRide*r*'s Avatar

    MoonRide*r* said:

    Post Come Home

    Ok this one is off the top of my head, so I shoulda posted in the "speed-wrting" thread but once again I can't find it. Sooooo ...

    Come Home

    The man is slime
    But his pantomime
    Seems so sublime
    That it numbs the mind
    But you're too good
    To be stuck in the hood
    of narco-be-good
    And his parvo brood

    You may not like it
    When I cauterize
    That preverted ****
    And his/her like
    But one day soon
    I'll come get you
    And bring you home
    Where you belong

    You wrote the lyric
    And I've got the tune
    You know where you belong
    Just come home soon
    Baby come home soon

    Don't you see
    It was all a mistake
    You know you need
    To reclaim your stake
    You see the door
    It's open wide
    Just step inside
    Just step inside

    You wrote the lyric
    And I've got the tune
    You know where you belong
    Just come home soon
    Baby come home soon

    We danced on the moon
    We wrote that tune
    You know where you belong
    Just come home soon
    Baby come home soon

    ~ ~ ~
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    Fantastic! Especially for the short time that you wrote it in! The message is kinda hidden but everyone feels it. Nice work.
     
  3. Mon said:

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    This is good and is there really a speed writing thread.
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Thanks buckets PZ

    Mon, ty too, and yeah one of the regulars started a "30 seconds" type of thread a few weeks ago, and then I made one post, and then it disappeared. It's in here somewhere ... .....
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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  5. Mon said:

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    k, if u find let me know.