Title: See You Again

Time flies by so fast
Soon you will be gone
I’ll have lost a close friend
Close like a sister
Hopefully you won’t be gone forever

(Chorus)
Cause I hope to see you again
Hopefully as time goes on
Our friendship will remain strong
Even if you forget me I’ll never forget you
I’ll miss you everyday that passes by
I’ll pray to see you again
My days will be a less cheerful
When you’re gone
I’ll see you again someday
Yes. When you go
I will see you again
This I vow
(Chorus end)

I’ll miss how you hug me
How they feel so comforting
How you make me laugh
I will miss looking in your eyes
How I’d become lost in them
I’ll miss hearing you laugh
How it was just so cute
I will not say goodbye

(chorusx2)

Hopefully time will go slow
So I can enjoy the time I have left with you
I don’t want to let you go
You’re like family to me
I will not let your memory fade away
I will think of you everyday
So I shall always remember you
I shall try hard not to cry
When you’re gone

(chorusx3)

I notice that in a lot of your songs, towards the end you do Chorus x 2, then verse, then Chorus x 3. Perhaps you could work on structure? Make it stand out a little more.