hey I'm new... I would like some critique of my song Breaking Down

First song I wrote... enjoy.


V1- breaking down your walls seemed easy
You opened up, said it was fate that you met me
It was love, but I can't be with you
It seemed so real but now I know it wasn't true
So I'm
Chorus- breaking down the walls
And you can't help but fall
Bursting through the haze
Looking for better days

Said I'm breaking down the walls
And you can't help but fall
For me
But that's not how its meant to be

V2- when we broke up
I was crushed
My whole world was upside down
But the guy who stole my world
Didn't wanna be around
And now that your back
And you want me back
I know that its not good for me
You broke my heart
So its time I start

Chorus x2

Outro (something that I wrote as a bridge after a third verse I wrote but don't really like.. lemme know)
I'll always be there for you baby
And you'll always be there for me
But no matter how hard we try
We can't get passed the lies
(Over chorus) I'm breaking down



Lemme know what you think. I have more songs to share too