The weight of the world

Have you ever been all alone in the night
Have you ever seen a moon shining so bright
Have you ever breathed smogless fresh air
Have you ever listened to silence everywhere

Bridge:
It seems to me there are no borders
I feel like all the world lies on my shoulders
And then I realize
That behind all lies
A solution exists
For everyone of us

Chorus:
The world could be a place for you and me
Where everyone gets a chance to be free
To give not take to love not hurt
And then we can stand the weight of the world

Have you ever stopped your life for a while
Have you ever tried to supress your pride
Have you ever looked to the eyes of nature
Have you ever resisted your moneyeating creature

Bridge:
It seems to me there are no borders
I feel like all the world lies on my shoulders
And then I realize
That behind all lies
A solution exists
For everyone of us

Chorus:
The world could be a place for you and me
Where everyone gets a chance to be free
To give not take to love not hurt
And then we can stand the weight of the world

When someday you´ll be all alone in the night
When someday you´ll see a moon shining so bright
When someday you´ll breathe smogless fresh air
When someday you´ll listen to silence everywhere

Bridge:
It seems to me there are no borders
I feel like all the world lies on my shoulders
And then I realize
That behind all lies
A solution exists
For everyone of us

Chorus:
The world could be a place for you and me
Where everyone gets a chance to be free
To give not take to love not hurt
And then we can stand the weight of the world

I can't leave feedback to someone who has specifically said that they won't leave feedback on anyone elses efforts.

Hugo this is as good as hundreds of commercially successful lyrics I've read in the last 40 years. Just a little help with grammar (red is delete, blue is add):

Originally Posted by Hugo Zhor

Have you ever been all alone in the night
Have you ever seen a moon shining so bright
Have you ever breathed a smogless fresh air
Have you ever listened to silence everywhere

Bridge:
It seems to me there are no borders
I feel like all the world lies on my shoulders
And then I realize
That behind all lies
A solution exists
For everyone of us

Chorus:
The world could be a place for you and me
Where everyone gets a chance to set be free (or to be set free)
To give not take to love not hurt
And then we can stand the weight of the world

Have you ever stopped your life for a while
Have you ever tried to supress your pride
Have you ever looked to the eyes of the nature
Have you ever resisted your moneyeating creature

Bridge:
It seems to me there are no borders
I feel like all the world lies on my shoulders
And then I realize
That behind all lies
A solution exists
For everyone of us

Chorus:
The world could be a place for you and me
Where everyone gets a chance to set be free (or to be set free)
To give not take to love not hurt
And then we can stand the weight of the world

When someday you´ll be all alone in the night
When someday you´ll see a moon shining so bright
When someday you´ll breathe a smogless fresh air
When someday you´ll listen to silence everywhere

Bridge:
It seems to me there are no borders
I feel like all the world lies on my shoulders
And then I realize
That behind all lies
A solution exists
For everyone of us

Chorus:
The world could be a place for you and me
Where everyone gets a chance to set be free (or to be set free)
To give not take to love not hurt
And then we can stand the weight of the world

I made the same corrections all the way through, altho I'm sure I didn't need to do that.

Nice thoughts too. I like this.

Originally Posted by MoonRide42

Hugo this is as good as hundreds of commercially successful lyrics I've read in the last 40 years. Just a little help with grammar (red is delete, blue is add):



I made the same corrections all the way through, altho I'm sure I didn't need to do that.

Nice thoughts too. I like this.

Thank you very much MoonRide42 for your grammar advices. I edited it. I appreciate your time to correct this.

Originally Posted by Experimentalist

I can't leave feedback to someone who has specifically said that they won't leave feedback on anyone elses efforts.

I don´t understand what you mean. Could you explain it to I could feedback then.

I highly like this , Extremely strong message and much props for the emotion behind this.

Originally Posted by HomeGrownProduction

I highly like this , Extremely strong message and much props for the emotion behind this.

Thank you. I´m glad you like it.