Never Look Back

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  1. Katie13's Avatar

    Katie13 said:

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    Why won稚 you save me from this world?
    Because I知 so tired and it痴 getting so cold,
    I can稚 think straight, my eyes drawing closed,
    That dull fuzzy feeling, I no longer know,
    My lips are numb, my fingers thick,
    Clock on the wall goes tick, tick, tick,
    My heart lies lifeless in my chest,
    A fist of still muscle, asleep in my breast,

    You could save my life, boy,
    Hold out your hand, we値l fly,
    Show me your shining lights,
    Your heaven past the sky,
    You could take me from this world,
    Of dull, of grey, of black,
    Take me to your universe,
    And I値l never look back,

    Still I知 sitting in the darkness, still alone,
    Feeling like I知 no longer at home,
    I haven稚 moved an inch, not at all,
    I知 trapped in here, within these walls,
    I知 going mad, my mind is aflame,
    With feelings of loss and thoughts of blame,
    Can you find me? I shed a tear,
    If I shout for you, will you hear?

    You could save my life, boy,
    Hold out your hand, we値l fly,
    Show me your shining lights,
    Your heaven past the sky,
    You could take me from this world,
    Of dull, of grey, of black,
    Take me to your universe,
    And I値l never look back,

    I知 trapped in limbo, the space in-between,
    Hoping against hope that this is a dream,
    That I値l wake up in your arms once again,
    I don稚 get why I知 so alone here when,

    You could save my life, boy,
    Hold out your hand, we値l fly,
    Show me your shining lights,
    Your heaven past the sky,
    You could take me from this world,
    Of dull, of grey, of black,
    Take me to your universe,
    And I値l never look back,
     
  2. OneSongWayne's Avatar

    OneSongWayne said:

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    Very nice. I got some good images.
     
  3. RobberBaron said:

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    That's astoundingly good! Pure brilliance I think music-wise you might want to use chords following a falling semitone at some point, as that seams to fit the style; something like: Db - Dbm - Ab, where the falling semitone notes would be F - E - Eb.
     
  4. Hugo Zhor said:

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    Great lyrics. I feel desperation in verses.
     
  5. Katie13's Avatar

    Katie13 said:

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    Thanks, peoples
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  6. RobberBaron said:

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    This was the first thing I commented on when I joined I nearly wrote "this was the first thing I commented on when I was born" XD
     
  7. Katie13's Avatar

    Katie13 said:

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    Haha, it would've been some skill if it'd been when you were born!! I thank you
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."