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  1. Mon said: 03-24-2011 11:38 AM

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  2. RobberBaron said: 03-24-2011 01:02 PM

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    Ooh, I love it. Great start, with the "it only takes a second", and some great lines throughout, "but I know it's just a false promise", and nice use of personification "a bleeding guitar". Awesome

  3. Mon said: 03-25-2011 01:16 PM

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    Thanx.