Love War

I hated this one, but Tim liked it enough to make a recording of him singing it so here goes (gulp):

Love War - Copyright © RobberBaron Enterprises 2011
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[Verses - Female]

I'm quite young but I'm getting on,
I feel I've lived for way to long,
All the pain and the hurt that I see,
This great big world ain't enough for me

As time passes I find the truth,
But what I need is less see-through,
Give you my heart, but you still won't see,
What you really really mean to me

[Bridge]

So just to let you know,
That my heart is sore,
Even though I love you,
I don't want pain anymore

[Chorus]

I'm hiding but I gotta show,
There's no better time for you to know,
I keep running, but it can't last,
I'm gonna leave you in my past

So now it's time for you to hear it,
All those times you crushed my spirit,
Love's to late, now it's time for war,
I don't know who you are anymore

[Verses - Male]

What do you want from me?
Is it something that I can't see?
I told you before, that we're just friends,
Without a beginning there are no ends

My teardrops hit the sand,
How can I find where I stand?
With you it's all one big game,
But I'm not getting on that train

[Bridge]

There are two ways it can go,
And alone I cannot fight 'em,
One for love, but the other oh no,
Wage war or be an item

[Chorus]

Love choses for us, you just simply know,
But even when you know it just won't show,
Love may chose but you control your life,
Why can't you see that I live in your strife

If I say yes, then what'll it be?
You'll be happy but what about me?
I'll spend my days looking after you,
But remaining slightly miserable too

The only way we can avoid pain,
Is if there is no war, no personal gain,
We can't love, or even be friends,
And maybe then it finally ends

[Extra-ey bit]

But I don't want it to,
But you have to,
Why can't you be with me?
It's not so clear to see

Just take my hand,
Time is running out,
Please just say you will,
I am without a doubt

I know it hurts,
Then why can't you agree?
Because love burns,
When you are not happy

Then learn to,
It's not something you can teach,
I wanna be with you,
But I cannot reach

[Spoken]

When one can't decide,
Whom he should stay with,
Rather than lock him out,
Help his heart to live

I know it may be hard,
If you want to stay with him,
But if you know him from his heart,
You'll know your chance is slim

Originally Posted by RobberBaron

I hated this one, but Tim liked it enough to make a recording of him singing it so here goes (gulp): ......

Hated it? Well I know the feeling all too well. But I like the conversation idea and it flows. No fear, it works, good job
If you wanna see something really bad then check out the one I'm posting right after this

Well thanks for that I'm sure we can apply the same logic for your song