Dark emptiness of black darkness

Nothingness is overwhelming me
Piece by piece
I can feel as it´s pushing me
To my knees
Black darkness is entering through me
Black by black
Human evil sucking my life out
No way back

To nowhere I am disappearing
On my way
All my heart´s still heavy bleeding
Day by day
Dark black hole is a place where once
Was my soul
Killing pain is eating my sick brain
To the core

Bridge:
As I´m drowning in my lake of tears
You are just pulling me deeper
As I´m shaking with all my fears
Another strike…is ready to complete…my disaster

Chorus:
Living dead…in my head
No emotions…devastation
No feelings…existing
Just ruin…my doing
Soul is burnt…no return
Empty shelf…is myself

Wow Hugo this has impact, and I might even say it's your best yet, because these few simple words are so strong. And it kinda sneaked up on me ... I had to pause at "Black by black" but then I thought, yeah that's a good way to put it, a reinforcement of piece-by-piece nothingness. And then after "Human evil sucking my life out, No way back", bam, I was hooked. And the finish is perfect.

In fact I'm a little worried now ... I know where Prague is, and I've got a bottle of something that will make you forget ALL your problems for a day or two ... so do you wanta meet me at the airport or tell me how to get to your house? Lol

This is really great, from start to finish, and I'd love to hear it set to metal or maybe a dark-heavy dubstep .. something like DatsiK would do?

Again I think this is a real keeper. I can imagine this so well in music.

You sure like BBCode MoonRide.

And agreed, some great word choices and phrases

Originally Posted by MoonRide42

Wow Hugo this has impact, and I might even say it's your best yet, because these few simple words are so strong. And it kinda sneaked up on me ... I had to pause at "Black by black" but then I thought, yeah that's a good way to put it, a reinforcement of piece-by-piece nothingness. And then after "Human evil sucking my life out, No way back", bam, I was hooked. And the finish is perfect.

In fact I'm a little worried now ... I know where Prague is, and I've got a bottle of something that will make you forget ALL your problems for a day or two ... so do you wanta meet me at the airport or tell me how to get to your house? Lol

This is really great, from start to finish, and I'd love to hear it set to metal or maybe a dark-heavy dubstep .. something like DatsiK would do?

Thank you MoonRide42. I´m glad you like it.

Don´t have to be worry about me. I´m ok now:-) These lyrics are about 4 years old. In these times I was really on a threshold of death and beside other things these lyrics helped me very much. I think from despair and desparation come the best lyrics.

You´re right. I wrote this song like very dark heavy doom metal.

Thank you.