Defeat

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    Katie13 said:

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    Well, it couldn’t have gone another way,
    It just wasn’t my time; it was always your day,
    My army fell in droves before your men,
    And when I hit the ground, I couldn’t rise again,

    You stole my plans, my trust, my heart,
    I should have guessed that from the start,
    You took my hand to strike me down,
    And left me bleeding on the ground,

    You’ve won the battle, won the war,
    I cannot fight you anymore,
    My Mordred, my Hook, my Moriarty,
    I die while you dwell in notoriety,
    My sword shattered, my tale forlorn,
    My warrior heart’s broken and torn,

    I fought you the best I ever could,
    But we both knew I never would,
    Defeat you, my love, my cold-hearted spy,
    I’ve no life left, no tears to cry,

    They knew, they warned me of your lies,
    I don’t know why it was such a surprise,
    Now you prepare to take my head,
    Just as you enticed me to your bed,

    You’ve won the battle, won the war,
    I cannot fight you anymore,
    My Mordred, my Hook, my Moriarty,
    I die while you dwell in notoriety,
    My sword shattered, my tale forlorn,
    My warrior heart’s broken and torn,

    Like the end of 1984,
    The good guys will triumph no more,
    But like Banquo, I’ll return,
    My love, you’ve a lesson to learn,
    Vengeance, since times of old,
    Is a course best served cold,

    You’ve won the battle, won the war,
    I cannot fight you anymore,
    My Mordred, my Hook, my Moriarty,
    I die while you dwell in notoriety,
    My sword shattered, my tale forlorn,
    My warrior heart’s broken and torn,

    Like the end of 1984,
    The good guys will triumph no more,
    But like Banquo, I’ll return,
    My love, you’ve a lesson to learn,
    Vengeance, since times of old,
    Is a course best served cold,
    As death,
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  2. RobberBaron said:

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    Ooh, great lines in there! Nice reference: "But like Banquo, I’ll return". This is a clever line: "I die while you dwell in notoriety" yay
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    Thanks That line took me ages as well - how to rhyme with Moriarty... :P
    Do the references work then? I wasn't sure... :/
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."