Lock me up again

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  1. Grendels said:

    Default Lock me up again

    Suffocation feels so right with you
    I’m in a cage, with all exits open and in view
    And like a bird I fly for freedom, and I claw myself away
    But something in my mind betrays my better nature, and wills me to stay
    And when the sun sets I return
    To let you lock me up again
    Lock me up again
    Lock me up again
    Lock me up again
    Lock me

    In diamond candy coated feather softened lies
    I can feel your breath on my neck reaching down inside
    Steel rose temple covered in your confidence pesticide
    It drains my will power and I feel the need to free myself
    It’s a pointless practice, and holds no alleviation
    I’m in a cage, with all exits blocked from view

    My sense of self is gone when I’m with you
    You reek of an ivory carapace wrapped in strongest glue
    Pushed asunder and torn down under your pisces nature arises
    I feel the urge to let you slip, and give you compromises
    A onetime pass to everything I hold
    It’s not the first won’t be the last and it’s tearing the soul
    I sold to you
    I let you close the door, I let you lock me up again
    Lock me up again
    Lock me up again
    Lock me up again
    Lock me

    Marauders look inside our perfect open cage
    Carnivorous orchids line the walls yet still they stay
    They put themselves inside my place and I wish they would take it
    But with you I am too weak, and no one can break this
    My hope flies away and I accept my fate
    Hang myself on your cold dark hair,
    Cold skin feather soft with love displaced
    My mud garden hangs down from a pearly gate
    I sit there waiting, building courage to escape
    Last edited by Grendels; 04-03-2011 at 11:44 PM.
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    I like this. It's got great lyrics - I like the first line 'Suffocation feels so right with you'. The imagery's very effective and it's got lovely flow. I feel that it's a ballad. Am I right?
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."