Stronger than me

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  1. Hugo Zhor said:

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    It comes to me slowly
    First I can control myself
    Then it starts to show me
    Hell is rising in my shell

    Bridge 1:
    Without warning itīs here
    My emotions get clear
    I taste a pressure
    Iīm out of my mind
    Something what has to go out

    Chorus:
    Every night
    And every day
    I canīt resist itīs stronger than me
    Lose my pride
    When itīs over
    I canīt stand it itīs stronger than me

    I will do anything
    To satisfy my immoral need
    No matter what price is
    No matter how I will bleed

    Bridge 1:
    Without warning itīs here
    My emotions get clear
    I taste a pressure
    Iīm out of my mind
    Something that has to come out

    Chorus:
    Every night
    And every day
    I canīt resist itīs stronger than me
    Lose my pride
    When itīs over
    I canīt stand it itīs stronger than me

    I canīt fight alone the loving damnation in me!
    Is there someone to make it through and help me?!

    Bridge 2:
    Now I know it is here
    I have lost all my fear
    I want now pleasure
    Itīs trapped me tight!

    Chorus:
    Every night
    And every day
    I canīt resist itīs stronger than me
    Lose my pride
    When itīs over
    I canīt stand it itīs stronger than me
    Last edited by Hugo Zhor; 04-06-2011 at 02:28 AM.
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    This builds beautifully, just like the song says the feeling does. I particularly like this line "I canīt fight alone the loving damnation in me!" - it just speaks out! :P
    Grammatically this - "Something what has to go out" - is terrible; though I know that's not the point in songs (hardly anyone gives a damn about grammar in lyrics, not that they should!), I can't actually glean what you're trying to say. Should it be something like 'Something that has to come out'?
    Just my humble opinion but other than that, I really like this song!!
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  3. Hugo Zhor said:

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    Thank you very much Katie13 for fixing my grammar mistakes. Nice line "Something that has to come out". I fixed it. English isnīt my native language so I canīt feel this mistake. Thank you.